Conor Latham

Improvements
on Feedback
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Feedback
This is the feedback I got about my edited images.

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1st Improvement
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After

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This is the image improved; the gradient overlay is less transparent so that the
contrast between the unedited section and the changed area is much more
noticeable. Before the image did not especially draw attention to the unedited
area, because the rest of the image was so transparent. Whereas now the rest of
the image is much darker and less transparent so it draws attention to the
unchanged section.

2nd Improvement
Before

After

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This is the image after, as you can see I have changed the background from
white to black, and have changed the stroke effect from red to white. This was to
try and make the text stand out more. It also looks less plain and boring, it is
more eye catching because of the dark background makes the light text stand
out and it is now more visually appealing. This is especially useful if the tennis
club wants to use this image on posters and flyers as it will stand out more on
the white paper than the previous image did.

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