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When popular tv shows like Seinfeld discussed LGBT issues, they sent the message to the general
public that it was okay to discuss these issues. I interviewed Dan Smith, who was born in 1986 and is
thus part of the Millenial generation, the first in American society to largely embrace the idea of LGBT
rights. He was only three years old when the first season of Seinfeld aired, but he said that his parents
watched the show and he watched reruns of it when he was older. According to Smith, Honestly,
when I was younger, I didn't even realize Seinfeld had so many references to gay issues, but now I can
see that it does. Other Millenials might also have watched Seinfeld and similar shows when they were
younger and focused more on the comedy or the main characters without noticing the show's sporadic
and brief references to LGBT issues. By discussing these issues on network tv, shows like Seinfeld
gave the public the idea that these were common and acceptable issues to discuss in public.
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