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Hook New world has grown up without significant awareness; the world is called
by online community.
Topic sentence Online community have fascinated me through several phases.
Supporting 1 Online communities were only a hobby to kill time, at beginning.
Detail 1 when I just finished my army service, I didnt return to school
immediately. So I had a lot of free time. I started web surfing into online
communities.
Supporting 2 Online communities were not only a hobby but a matter of serious
interest.
Detail 2 - after half a year of free time, I returned to school. I took a class
about storytelling. I also realize a story is in online communities.
Supporting 3 I decided to be a story analyst of online communities.
Detail 3 Study data mining tools including programming language,
database, and analysis method. Study in graduate school or in course of
government.
Conclusion Im going to be the expert of online community.