Ariana Lester

Senior Portfolio
20 April 2016
Best Piece Response
The reason I chose The Purpose of American Government essay was that I think it
exemplifies my best effort and writing talents. It is perfectly formatted with a title and work
cited page. It received a perfect score due to the conclusiveness of the essay on the topic.
The reader should expect to find an essay that follows AEO formatting. It has strong
concrete details with informative commentary. The essay has the right amount of opinion and
many interesting facts that support my opinion. By reading this essay I hope the reader can
pin-point writing capabilities as well as my research abilities. I hope that the reader has a
positive outlook on my readiness to enter college with satisfactory writing skill that will in
turn thrust me into a great academic standing.
After completing this assignment I have a newfound understanding of why American
government is what it is today. I learned that government is a process and it can take many
tries to get it right, and America was no exception. It also made me thankful that our
founding fathers chose the path to give all people the right to life, liberty, and happiness. I
will use the knowledge I acquired from researching and writing this paper to make calculated
decisions on who should be president and how will they affect federal processing. I have
become more concerned for the future of other branches in government that I never took
interest in before, like congress and the state of the supreme court.