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Lizbeth Castillo

Curmano
English P.3
13 October 2015
Reflection
My sniper paragraph was pretty strong, it had some good details but maybe
could have added more to it. I could of made better supporting details that really tie
in to the paragraph. One thing I did well was my topic sentence I feel like it really
explains what the story is about but leaves you curious and wanting to read more. I
need to work on my concluding sentence more because I feel like it didn't tie in to
the topic sentence.

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