Professional Documents
Culture Documents
TeacherName:Mr.Schrader
StudentName:________________________________________
CATEGORY
4Points
3Points
2Points
1Point
QualityofInformation Theinformationis
historicallyaccurate.
Theessayisfreeofany
errors.
Theinformationis
historicallyaccurate,
buttherearesome
minorerrorsinthe
essay.
Theinformationisnot
veryhistorically
accurate.Thereare
errorsthroughoutthe
essay.
Theinformationisvery
historicallyaccurate.
Therearenumerous
errorsthroughoutthe
essay.
Introduction
Theintroductory
paragraphisgood.
Thereisathesis
statementthat
communicatesideas
andthethemeofthe
essay.
Theintroductory
paragraphis
unsatisfactory.The
thesisstatementis
unclearanddoesnot
communicateideasor
thethemeoftheessay
verywell.
Theintroductory
paragraphispoor.It
lacksathesisstatement
anddoesnot
communicateideasor
thethemeoftheessay.
Thebodyparagraphs
aregood.The
paragraphsare
organized.Thecontent
supportsthethesis
whiledemonstratingan
Thebodyparagraphs
areunsatisfactory.The
paragraphsarenotvery
organized.Thecontent
doesnotentirelyrelate
tothethesis.The
Thebodyparagraphs
arepoor.The
paragraphsare
disorganized.The
contentdoesnotrelate
tothethesisatall.The
Theintroductory
paragraphisexcellent.
Thethesisstatementis
clearwhilealso
effectively
communicatingideas
andthethemeofthe
essay.
BodyParagraphs(x2) Thebodyparagraphs
areexcellent.The
paragraphsarevery
organized.Thecontent
supportsthethesis
extremelywellwhile
demonstratingahigh
levelofunderstanding
ofthematerial.The
informationisverywell
synthesized.
understandingofthe
material.The
informationisproperly
synthesized.
paragraphsdonot
demonstratean
adequatelevelof
comprehensionofthe
material.The
informationisnotwell
synthesized.
paragraphsdemonstrate
alackofunderstanding
thematerial.The
informationisnot
synthesizedatall.
Conclusion
Theconclusionis
excellent.Iteffectively
summarizesthethesis
andthemesoftheessay
withoutleavingany
looseends.
Theconclusionisgood.
Itsummarizesthethesis
andthemesoftheessay
withoutleavingleaving
anylooseends.
Theconclusionis
unsatisfactory.Itdoes
notsummarizethe
thesisandthemesofthe
essaywell.Thereare
somelooseendsinthe
essay.
Theconclusionispoor.
Itdoesnotsummarize
thethesisandthemes
oftheessayatall.
Therearemanyloose
endsevidentinthe
essay.
Mechanics
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