Overall you wrote a good paper with a lot of really solid information on terrorism.

You
cited your sources well in the paper (be sure to add them as a separate page when you're
done obviously) I thought that almost all of the paper was necessary information, but in
some places you could have organized the information better. For instance: "if we take
IMU (Islamic Movement of Uzbekistan) which has more than 500 members and many of
them are uneducated, came from poor families[TL1] . Moreover, many of them really do
not know for what they are struggling[TL2] . But on the other hand, the majority of
executors of 9/11 were from Saudi Arabia. They were from middle class and educated."
This sentence has solid information and gives both sides which is good, but it would be
more solid if you added your opinion as well. Overall it was a solid paper like I said
before, but be sure to organize it in a way that will draw in the reader at the opening and
structure it where it is clear what motives the majority of terrorists have if you can. Good
job!