Anthony Desoyza

Professor Olivas
English 1A
22 March 2016
Correction Sheet
1. Rule
a.
b.
c.
2. Rule
a.
b.
c.

Comma
2IC
The longer a person represses it, the hungrier for indulgence it becomes.
Comma
2IC
The hunger that he could not indulge in, which in itself caused an even greater
desire for it.

3. Rule
a. Comma
b. 2IC
c. He was well aware of both the good and evil that was contained within him
however, due to the fact the he tried to only indulge in his taste for good, his
desire for evil grew more powerful and warped.
4. Rule
a. Comma
b. 2IC
c. Had the doctor not focused so much on his good virtue and found healthy ways to
quench his thirst for evil, he would not have been so compelled to commit evil in
secret.
5. Rule
a. Hyphen
b. To unify elements
c. That way it loses all the pent-up power it has when it is repressed.
6. Rule
a. Comma
b. Non-essential
c. The answer is, simply, balance.
7. Rule
a. Dash
b. For Emphasis
c. It is the Yin-Yang of good and evil within usThe balance.