Using this format of revision has been very beneficial to me.

The formats make

writing more clear and much smoother. Using exemplification allowed me to be my
own source and to use as many examples as I needed. When revising this
paragraph first I thought about what I wanted to go over so that it would
successfully reflect my thesis statement. I then deleted any unneeded
information.Once I completed that I introduced my point I was trying to bring across
in the clearest way I could. Next I added several examples that supported my
claims. I made sure to edit those claims while I worked so that they would fit
successfully. Lastly I added transitions that helped my paragraphs to flow together
more smoothly.