WRITING REFLECTION # ______3____

Mrs. Cracchiolo (2014-2015)

PIECE OF WRITING _________________Macbeth Theme Essay____________________________
In class writing OR out of class writing
1. Looking at the feedback, what/where do you think you did particularly well?
Overall!! I think I did a fantastic job on this paper. My quotes were documented properly.
My transitions were all there. Topic sentences were there and concluding sentences. Intro
and conclusion paragraphs were placed perfectly.

2. Looking at the feedback, what do you think was the area you need the most
improvement in and why? (Be Specific)
She didnt leave much feedback when she gave me mine back. I couldve cleaned up my
work cited some. I also couldve cleaned up some grammar mistakes, my grammar isnt
perfect just yet, but thats something that always can be improved on

3. Did the loop cycle work for you? Why or why not?
The loop cycle always works for me. By this time I have mastered the loop cycle
and as always it never fails to succeed.
4. Body paragraph construction is the most important part of your paper since this is the
area that uses evidence to back up your claims. Looking at your paper and feedback,
rate yourself overall on the following elements that correspond to the loop structure.
STRONG
AVERAGE
WEAK
MISSING
Topic Sentences
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Suppoting Details (SD)
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Explanations (EXP)
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Closings (CLOS)
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Transitions
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Incorporating Quotes

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Set up quotes
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Explain relevance

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Concluding sentences
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OVERALL RATING
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5. The big question: based on your comments, checklist where you rated yourself on body
paragraph structure, and overall score, what NEW GOAL do you have for your next
writing assignment? In other words, what skills will you try to focus on in the future and
why?
GOAL:

My new goal is to keep up the perfect quality of papers like I did in this one. To pace myself
like I did. To have multiple revisers to check it. To do everything I did this paper or better

WHY:
This silly question. I want to do it because doing well feels so good.

6. Any other feedback youd like to share??

Youve been a great teacher. I love our book discussions I have nothing to say about you.