It is thought that <A PASSIVE GOOD GRAMMAR POINTS>(THEN DISCUSS THE FIRST PART OF THE QUESTION ) However,

others believe (AND DISCUSS THE SECOND HALF OF THE QUESTION)<REMEMBER TO PARAPHRASE THE WORDS OF THE
POINTS OF VIEWS EXPRESSED IN THE QUESTION> But is this true?<RHETORICAL QUESTION-GOOD POINTS FOR LEXIS>

I mostly agree with the opinion expressed and in the following I will explain my reasons for these views.
<THIS LINKS THE INTRODUCTION TO THE FIRST PARAGRAPH AND GIVES YOU GOOD MARK
(Band 6 or lower). TO GET A HIGHER BAND SCORE (6.5 and higher) USE YOUR ENGLISH TO
EXPRESS YOUR OPINION NOT THE FORMAT e.g. The Government certainly should offer tax
benefits to companies which use ways to make our air cleaner.>

The most important point with reference to (HERE REFER BACK TO THE POINT IN THE QUESTION )to
be discussed is. <GOOD LINKING BACK TO THE INTRODUCTION-EXTRA POINTS> (HERE PUT
THE MAIN IDEATOPIC SENTENCE). Not only .< GOOD GRAMMAR POINTS FOR THIS
PHRASE>(TALK MORE ABOUT YOUR OPINION)But . Also <INTRODUCE ANOTHER IDEA THAT
SUPPORTS WHAT YOU HAVE SAID>. An example of this from my own experience can be seen here
where.. (GIVE THE EXAMPLE.<POINTS FOR A WELL ROUNDED PARAGRAPH>

A further point to be made concerning this topic (HERE YOU COULD ACTUALLY PUT THE QUESTION
TOPIC AND THEN ADD YOUR NEW IDEA) is <EXTRA POINTS FOR LINKING TO LAST PARAGRAPH
AND INTRODUCTION> (NOW ADD ANOTHER IDEA IN SUPPORT OF THE MAIN IDEA IN THIS
PARAGRAPH) Only by +verb+ing can this situation be improved. I, for one, (ADD EXAMPLE FROM
YOUR EXPERIENCE) might have +past participle <NEW WAY TO INTRODUCE AN EXAMPLE/EXTRA
POINTS FOR USING A PAST MODAL>

Despite having agreed with such aforementioned ideas, however, these merely highlight the positive,
whereas, in this case there are also alternative views.(ADD NEW OPPOSITE MAIN IDEA ) <GOOD
LINKING INSIDE THE SENTENCE EXTRA POINTS> which could have further . For instance,.
(EXAMPLE FROM YOUR EXPERIENCE)

In conclusion, having carefully considered the opinions above, I feel . <SAY CLEARLYTO THE EXAMINER WITH YOUR
EXPRESSIONS THAT THIS IS THE SUMMARY> (CONFIRM YOUR ORIGINAL OPINION IN PARAPHRASE)
(THEN SUMMARISE IN THE FINAL SENTENCE WITH A MIXED CONDITIONAL) Had I not +past participle, I
would not +infinitive today.