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(State(how(well(the(edited(version(meets(the(goals(of(your(audience,(your(instructor,(and(
yourself.((Note(the(major(informational,(rhetorical,(and(technological(problems(you(
encountered(and(how(you(attempted(to(overcome(each.(Look(ahead(to(changes(you(might(
want(to(make(for(the(portfolio(version(of(this(work(to(be(submitted(at(the(end(of(the(term.(
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Project(one(was(to(edit(one(chapter(of(the(eBook(about(the(Prospect(for(Success((PFS)(courses.(
The(eBook(is(directed(mainly(to(the(instructors(of(the(PFS.(The(edited(version(of(Chapter(1(A(
meets(many(of(the(goals(directed(to(the(audience,(Mr.(Wickliff,(and(Myself.(Throughout(the(
editing(process,(we(came(across(many(challenges.(Although(the(content(of(the(eBook(was(well(
written(as(directed(to(faculty(member(of(UNC(Charlotte,(there(were(a(few(wordy(sentences(and(
grammar(errors(but(some(of(the(main(obstacles(were(noted(within(the(format.(Looking(to(
complete(the(eBook(in(an(MLA(format(we(were(unsure(if(the(information(was(cited(correctly.(
We(recognized(that(UNC(Charlotte(was(cited(incorrectly(along(with(the(QEP(citations.(We(made(
note(of(this(and(left(inquires(for(the(author.(We(made(a(few(other(corrections(to(format(
regarding(chats(and(graphs(throughout(the(document.(We(fixed(the(wording(a(position(of(graph(
titles(and(subtitles(and(reorganized(table(information.(Overall,(the(first(editing(project(was(a(
success.((