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Industrialrevolutiondbqfinaldraft Daisyherrera
Industrialrevolutiondbqfinaldraft Daisyherrera
by Daisy L. Herrera
IbelieveIndustrialRevolutionatimeofproblemsbecausemanypeoplewereleftinthestreetsinpoor
conditions.Therewasagreatamountofpollutionthatwascreatedbythefactoriesthatwerebuiltinthe
areathathadagreateffectonthepopulationoneachindividualwholivednearby.Lastlymanychildren
werealsogreatlyaffectedbythefacttheythewouldnolongergotoschoolbutinsteadworkinfactories
thatwouldinjurethemselfwhileworkingthemachines.
Manyfamilieshadtoworkwhichleadtopovertywhichleftfamiliestoliveincruelconditions
andpoorworkingconditionsaswell.
Thesmellwassofoulthatitalmostknockedthetwomen
down.Theybegantopenetrate(
walkthrough)
thethickdarknessoftheplaceandtoseethreeor
fourlittlechildrenrollingonthedamp(
wet)
brickfloor,whichoozedwiththefilthymoistureof
thestreet.thiswasthedescriptionofElizabethGaskellwritteninthenovel
MaryBarton
ThisevidencessupportsmystatementbecauseElizabethGaskellisnovelistwhowroteanovelMary
Bartonwhoshowstheperspectiveoftheworkingclass.
Gaskelldescribesofhowlivingconditionswere
duringIndustrialRevolutionduetoallthefactoriesthatwerebuilt.
Youwentdownonestepfromthe
foul(
gross)
areaintothecellarwhereafamilyofhumanbeingslived.Themanyofthewindows
werebrokenandstuffedwithrags.
FurthermoreElizabethGaskellexplainedofhowconditionswere
athomeoftheworkingclass.
Thisevidencedemonstratesofhowmanypeoplehadtosufferinadaily
basesandhowtheindustrialrevolutionwasatimeofproblems.Theworkingclasswouldgettheshort
endofthisstick.
Notonlywaswerethehomesofthoselivingintheareasubstandardbutalsotheenvironment
wasdegradingduringIndustrialrevolution.
Asortofblacksmokecoversthecity.Underthis
halfdaylight300,000humanbeingsareceaselessly(
withoutanybreak)
atwork.Thehomesof
thepoorarescatteredhaphazard(
inamessyway)
aroundthefactories.
AsstatedbyAlexisde
tocquevilletheskieswerecoveredinablacksmokethatwascausedbyallthefactoriesthatwere
producingmassiveproductions.
Workerswouldhavetoworkhardhoursandweren'tevenlivingin
suitableconditions.Mostcurrentlymanyworkerswenttoworksickandunfittowork.
EdwinChadwicka
publichealthcommitments
Diseasescausedoraggravatedbyatmosphericimpuritiesproducedby
decomposinganimalandvegetablesubstances,bydampandfilth,andcloseandovercrowded
dwellings,prevailamongthelaboringclasses.
EdwinChadwickwasapublicreformeratthetimeand
givesexplanationsofhowdiseaseswerebeingspread.
Thisexampleprovidesofhowtherewasnowayof
runningawayfromIndustrialrevolutionproblemsandwhatcausedmanytohavepoorhealth.
Notonlywereadultsdoingallthislaborbutalsosmallchildrenwhowereuneducatedwouldalso
workhardhoursaswell.
Manychildren'shandsandarmshadbeencaughtinthemachinery.In
manyinstancesthemusclesandtheskinisstrippeddowntothebone.
Michaelward
adoctor
for30yearsatthetimeandinformsthatchildrenwouldworkonmachineryandwouldoften
injurethemself.
Childrenwouldlosetheireducationtoworkfortheirfamiliesandwere
underfedwhileworking.
Thenumberofchildrenatthattimeintheschoolwhowereemployed
(
working)
infactorieswas106.Thenumberofchildrenwhohadreceivedinjuriesfromthe
machineryamountedtoverynearlyhalf.
Childrenweretoobusyworkingthatmanydidn'tevengoto
school.
Childrenhadtogotoworkinsteadofschoolandwouldhurtthemselfgreatlybythemachineryor
wouldgotoschoolwheretheeywouldteachchildrenaboutmachinery
IndustrialRevolutiondidbringimprovementstothemodernworldbutbroughtmoreproblems
forthosewhohadtoworkatit.Workerswereunderfedandwereonlypaidinpennies,manychildren
diedfromworkinginmachineryandtakingcareofthemselfbecausethereparentswhoweretoobusy
working.Familieslivedinpoorconditionswhichspreaddiseases.Workersrightsandtherightsfor
educationrelatetomyargumentbecauseworkershadnorightstheyweretogotoworkinpoor
conditionsandchildrenwerestrippedawayfromeducation.