Poster Review

Structure and Content:

The poster has a clear structure including an introduction to the topic of development reviews
and audits, the different types of reviews and audits which were used throughout different
phases of the project (Concept Exploration Phase to Production Phase), as well as a
conclusion which summarizes findings and a recommendation providing suggestions to
improvements
Good use of dark poster background with white texts in the majority of the section. Mostly
clear and readable. Good use of diagrams in assisting readers to comprehend reviews/audits in
a systems engineering perspective
Comprehensive timeline detailing the reviews occurred, giving the readers an understanding
of the orders events that took place
Software Specification Review justifies its purpose using examples and comparisons of
software stabilities
Preliminary Design Review accurately identifies the problem of weight issues as well as the
associated impacts and delays that occurred, implying an improvement should have been
made at that specific phase
Overall, the main content on development reviews and audits include overview and outcomes
detailing main findings and related complications. Examples are used which clearly
demonstrates topic understanding
Some good and specific recommendations in answering the question of what improvements
could have been made? to improve the overall project

Recommendations:

An Alternative System Review comparing the Boeings design and the F-35 design should be
included in the Concept Exploration Phase to assist readers in understanding the possible
range of options considered
A System Functional Review could have been included in the poster to examine how the
project progressed from the Concept Exploration Phase to Demonstration Validation Phase.
Possible weaknesses and outcomes could be identified here to explain how the project had an
overall bad acquisition strategy
Amount of texts in the development reviews/audits should be reduced or summarized using
bullet point forms. This can create a better clarification of information
A different text color could be used to separate the overview and the outcome of each
reviews/audits to make it more visibly identifiable
A list of reference could be added to allow readers to find information on specific reviews or
audits