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Read each of the following DULL passages and rewrite using descriptive language. You may use a
thesaurus.
Example:
Dull - "My dog gets excited when it's time for her treat."
Descriptive – "Elizabeth's furry little body quivers with anticipation when she hears her cookie jar open. Her
tail is a blur and drops of drool glisten on her chin while she waits anxiously for her nightly Milkbone."
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Now choose five words you used as descriptive language and list them. Use them in a paragraph to describe
something of your choosing in vivid detail: