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Page One:

Panel 1: A young man in a costume stands over the body of a man in a suit and tie. The man is lying in a

very awkward position with legs bent under him and arms at weird angles. The young man has one hand

crumpled into a fist. There is another costumed man behind him yelling.

Panel 2: The boy turns and looks at him his head is angle down and his eyes are looking forward there is a

shroud of darkness around him. He is smiling.

Panel 3: The boy leaps into the air toward the man with his knees up and his arms out from him with the

hands folded into fists.

Page Two:

Panel 1: The boy lands in front of the man. He punches as he comes down, and the man staggers

backward away from him.

Panel 2: The man recovers with the second punch and blocks it.

Panel 3: He grabs the boy by the forearm and pulls him forward.

Panel 4: The man plants a forearm in the boy’s cheek, knocking him backward.

Panel 5: The boy staggers back growling at the man.

Panel 6: He kicks at the man, who catches his leg.

Page 3:

Panel 1: The man throws the boy backward by his leg and the boy does a flip.

Panel 2: The boy lands and stand there smiling at him.

Panel 3: In quick succession, boy punches with right hand blocked by the man’s left.
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Panel 4: Boy punches with left hand blocked by man’s right.

Panel 5: Boy punches with right hand blocked again.

Panel 6: Boy punches with left hand blocked by man’s right and caught.

Panel 7: Boy punches with right hand and that is caught by man too.

Panel 8: Man does a double thrust to the boy’s throat.

Page Four:

Panel 1: The boy staggers back holding his throat and the man leaps forward.

Panel 2: The man hits the boy on the back of the neck with his elbow.

Panel 3: He brings his knee into the boy’s face and the boy flies backward.

Panel 5: The boy lands on the ground with his back to the man.

Panel 6: As the man steps forward the boy spins his torso around to reveal a gun.

Page Five:

Panel 1: Close up on the man’s face.

Panel 2: Close up on the boy’s face, he is smiling insanely.

Panel 3: The man’s face turns hard his mouth is set.

Panel 4: The boy’s smile falters a little.

Panel 5: The man jumps forward, slamming his palm in the boy’s nose. Blood flies out of the nose and he

drops the gun.

Panel 6: The man stands over the boy, whose head is in a puddle of blood with his eyes and mouth open.
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Panel 7: The man falls to his knees next to the boy’s body.

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