Kenya Smith

Eng 1102
Dr. Jan Rieman
Feb. 21, 2011

Dr. Jan,

Thank you very much for the in depth feedback, it has opened my eyes to further improvements that

were not brought up in peer-editing. I really like the way that you added comments right beside the

passages you were referring to, when I go back and edit my paper it will be much easier to know exactly

where to make changes. I love the fact that you not only give constructive advice on what to improve

upon but praise for good parts in the paper as well. I also found the short letter at the end of the paper

to be very motivating.

-Kenya