Thuy Tran

AP English Language 7th

Ms.Lopez-Garcias
My Writing

As most students learned that junior year is one of the most important
to year to determine your high school diploma. For those students who
always did their work, it’s a year that makes it greater. For students, who are
lack of good grades then this year would be a chance to make-up and
improve to a better condition. However, among foreign students like I am,
this was a year to keep trying my hardest. To make each year becomes an
improvement for every subject in school.

Like several other students, I’m come from US about five years, I
always tell myself to give out my best effort in every assignment. Therefore,
my English level has been better in every semester. This was proven through
the comparison of my essay from the second semester back to the first
semester. Throughout this time period, I’ve been working with two of my
English teacher with the grammar error, organization, learned how to use
different type of writing and voices to create a more effective and
appropriate works.

My writing has been improved from practices of basic element that

require in this subject, such as grammar, sentence structure, and so much
more compositions. I’m also work on accurate citation of evidences to
successfully support my opinion and idea. This year I was realize many
things that I have been not focus and forget in several years. That mostly
includes basic elements of writing that I have described above.