-1Dear Mrs.

Kraus,

Some of the things that I struggled with on my paper was trying to come up with

good concrete details to go with my topic. I also thought that making them flow with the

rest of my paper was harder this time. I also thought it was easier this time to come up

with a thesis to tie in with my topic. Also coming up with my concrete details was a lot

easier this time.

Sincerely,

Kiara Williams