1) ALL MY COMMENTS / CHANGES WILL BE IN CAPS 2) PORTIONS HIGHLIGHTED IN BLUE NEED TO BE DELETED.

3) REWRITE MATERIAL IN BOLD ACCORDING TO MY COMMENTS THE FIRST PARA VAGUE. I WANT YOU TO ORGANIZE IT CRISPLY ALONG THE FOLLOWING LINES: 1) Start by clearly stating that you are interested in ___ 2) When and how you developed this interest (you can include any personal interest also) 3) Link this info to a projectsaying that the project gave you a brief intro to the aspects related to your interest (you can also mention related subjects) 4) Any training you underwent 5) If current work is related to ____ include details 6) In ____what are the aspects that interest you and whyyou can also include some tentative topics you want to explore 7) After ms ..if you want to continue to do phd, mention that or the kind of career you will be looking at 8) Give details of your bachelors, - subjects, other projects extra curricular 9) Conclude with why this university you can personalize this para for each univ. 10) Your sop should be about 2 pages (1 spaced) only the first page should incorporate points 1-7 and the second page can gave an idea of your background. Research: Faculty: Tuition: Financial Aid: Entrance Requirements: Application Deadline: Application Fee: RESEARCH: FACULTY: TUITION: FINANCIAL AID: ENTRANCE REQUIREMENTS: APPLICATION FEES: APPLICATION DEADLINE