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Topic:Your friend has sent you a voicemail. Unfortunately you are busy on Tuesday lunch time. Suggest an alternative. Use the correct future forms and describe the restaurant. Type into the input box. When you're finished, click 'Submit.' Write 50-70 words. Your writing with Corrections Hi Mike, all good?(D)(>>) Let's having a(D)(>>) lunch together!(D)(>>) during the week(MW)(>>because) I can't because(x>>y)(>>go) this week(PU)(>>. ) I have a lot (MW)(>>of) work at the company. What aboutto have(D)(>>) lunch at Subway? Are you free on Friday? It's going to be good and we need to talk. I'll wait for you at 1 pm in front of the gas station. You can go in my car.(D)(>>) See you(PR)(>>on) friday (C)(>>Friday). For the editing marks that I used show an incorrect word or phrase, please refer to the list at the end of this document Overall Teacher Comments Hello Thank you for your interesting submission. You have put a lot of work into this and tried very hard to express yourself in English. Try to write in short, clear sentences to help you express yourself more clearly. I have deleted unnecessary word(s), punctuation or sentence(s) from your writing to help it flow better. Capitalization - the only time a capital letter should be used is after a full-stop, at the beginning of a sentence and if the word is a proper noun (e.g. the name of a person, place, era, organization). - my name is lucy, i am from london and i speak english and french. - My name is Lucy, I am from London and I speak English and French. We use the preposition 'on' with specific days. Enjoy your studies online with Englishtown and good luck with the work to come. Writing Grade:89