anyone can check my essay.i am kind low about the grammar and tenses..pleasa..

In the middle of school,i started to read novels and also be the first gut who r eads such a love story.Who cares?at least i can add my knowledge as equal as the people outside rather than me,just sit and study in the hostel of Science Schoo l at Kota Tinggi,Johor.Until now,it is my favourite things to do. My name is Zulfadhli bin Zainudin.I was born in Hospital Sultanah Aminah on 1st April 1991.It is been 19 years my family lives at our own house to be situated a t Ulu Tiram,Johor.Being the eldest brother among 4 siblings are really big liabi lity for me to emerge my parents and my siblings that i can be a successful and reverent human beings in the future.For today,i am in my first semester in Diplo ma of Teaching English as a Second Language at Kolej Poly-Tech MARA,Cheras,Kuala Lumpur.I write this essay for the best of my luck to get MARA scholarship to su pport my study for three years.I hope to get better in this term. I really wish to speak well-spoken english,express myself in right word and expr ession,and span to write out beautiful essays.What driven me most in learning en glish was the individual personality illustrated by the power of speaking in eng lish.I am not saying that i did not have my own personality before learning engl ish.For me,as a tool to express myself,english helped me prove that i was invisi ble.In the future,i want to become an english lecturer in some university,teachi ng people or students to learn and improve their english better.Relates that it is very important to confess with others more nowadays. And yes,english release me from my weakness and i realize my strength is simply based on my ambition to live medically-normal people.Perhaps this answer is quit e enough for my essay to get MARA scholarship to further and support my study.Th ank you.