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Student Composition 9: The Greatest Invention in My Eyes About 5000 years ago today (1) in ancient Egypt, thousands

of people were building pyramids for their King. As we all know, at that time there was no machine (2). Then you will wonder how could they carry so many huge stones? How could they create such splendid pyramids? How could they create such a miracle? Well, the answer is the wheel (3). Wheel makes everything possible. So in my eyes wheel is the greatest invention. Maybe you will challenge me,wheel is so common that everybody takes it for granted. Why do you think is the greatest invention? (4) Actually, wheel has been playing an important role in every aspect of peoples life from antiquity to today. As everyone knows, wheel makes traveling much easier. In ancient time, people traveled on foot. It wasted too much time. People often felt very tired. And also I think its a damage to the shoes (5). Dont you think so? Then a clever man thought of the wheel and the horse. He put them together, and the first cart was born. It saved time and stamina (6) as well.

I often dream the same dream: I am driving together with my mother on a (1) stretched straight path . The birds are singing and (2) playing around the car, the flowers are (3) opening (4) richly (5) which decorate the land. The breeze is flirting with (6) our hair, my long, black waterfall and my mothers short gray hair. This is a lovely dream from which I never want to wake up. (7) Pu Shu also has a dream, Gently you passed, like a gust of wind . The instant you touched me I suddenly want to go far far away, to see the colorful world with you. We have different dreams but meanwhile we have the same carrier to (8) carry our dreams. (9) That is car. You may say I am (10) desperately

want a car to fulfill my dream , (11) as a matter of fact ,you are wrong ,because I do have a car , the best car in the world, (12) whose brand is not Lincoln , not Mercedes (13) Bench , but MOTHER. Obviously, my car is a special one, but it (14) consists of things with which you (15) cant be too familiar. Firstly, I have the best engine in the world. (16) That is mothers HEART. It can be started whenever (17) in need because children are mothers (18) haunts forever. (19) Mother s heart can (20) start you, can support you, can spur you forward, (21) which is perpetual. (22) Next to it, I have the best steering wheel. (23) That is mothers MOUTH. When I am in a (24) mess, it always tells me the truth and guides me out of it; when I am lost, it always points out the right direction; when I am in the wrong, it always gives me the best (25) guidance. Moreover, the wheels are extremely important. If a car has no wheels, how can it run? (26) Roll like a ball or slip like a train? Here, I have wheels which will never be broken. (27) That is mothers BACK. Though it is not too strong, it can shift a mountain (28) on; though it is not too straight, it can straighten for me all the roads and streets. It (29) rolled and rolled, mothers youth (30) was rolled away while my youth blossoms on mothers back. The cab is also unique. (31) That is mothers BOSOM. When I am tired, it always gives me the most (32) warmest embrace and comfort ; when lonely , it (33) can always be there to accompany me; when in desperation, it always gives me hope and courage to look forward. Indeed, it is the safest bay after (34) great storm and hurricane, it is the warmest place after severe coldness. That is my car, priceless and unparalleled. Do I envy the ones driving a car? Yes. But that is temporary. (35) I receive the eternal envy for I deeply know my mother is the best one, the greatest one in the world in my eye. MOTHER is a word which means the world to me. I love my mother.

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