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Cowboys in A Surreal Place
Cowboys in A Surreal Place
Cowboys in A Surreal Place
FADE IN:
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 2.
DAN:
You’d think there’d be more of
them, out here.
Tom struggles to light his cigarette with a match and fails.
He gets out another one. Dan notices his struggle and takes
the cigarette out of his mouth and the matches in his own
hand, gives Tom a reproachful look, and easily lights up.
He takes a quick puff and hands the cigarette back to Tom.
DAN:
Fire doesn’t take too kindly to the
wind, Tom.
Tom makes a face as Dan turns away. Dan looks down at Lefty.
DAN:
Tired, Lefty?
LEFTY:
Not so much. I’m just kinda...
wonderin’.
TOM:
That’ll getcha nowhere.
DAN:
What about?
LEFTY:
Oh, just... how we know we’re going
the right way is all. No compass or
anythin’.
TOM:
Oh, you know we don’t need one of
those, Lefty. Not when we’ve got
Dan here. Man practically is the
north pole.
Lefty laughs gratefully, Dan ignores them and continues
looking over the scene.
LEFTY:
I just don’t know, though, how we
know if we... if we ain’t going
around in a big circle, know what I
mean? I don’t know how we can find
anything, let alone that little
girl, if we keep going like this.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 3.
TOM:
What, Lefty, you miss town?
LEFTY:
Which one?
DAN:
It matter? They’re all the same.
You been to one you been in all of
’em.
TOM:
Kinda like a whore.
DAN:
Shut up, Tom. (to Lefty) You know
it’s better bein’ out here than in
town. Land doesn’t lie.
LEFTY:
Guess not.
TOM:
Lefty’s just afeared you’re leading
us in circles, Dan, isn’t that
right?
DAN:
I don’t know where we’re going
anymoren’ you do- but I know where
we been. An I know we’re getting
closer all the time.
LEFTY:
I just-
DAN:
You’re always just something. Let’s
get goin.
TOM:
I ain’t finished my smoke yet.
DAN:
You think THEY rest for smokes?
TOM:
I wouldn’t know...
His words are defiant but his tone is somewhat sheepish.
Dan sets out and Lefty immediately gets up to follow him.
Tom does the best he can with his cigarette and finally
tosses it.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 4.
FLASHBACK
Through a stylistic screen gazes a girl, young and pretty
with the sun behind her, smiling in a silent-film star
fashion. She looks up abruptly as if she’d heard a noise.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 5.
TOM:
Think that’s good enough for today,
man?
DAN:
Naw. But I know if you two don’t
get some shut-eye you’re gonna be
griping all the way.
TOM:
Yeah, and you’re always a ray of
sunshine.
DAN:
Just don’t bitch in your sleep,
Tim.
TOM:
It’s Tom.
DAN:
Is it?
Lefty is still in the distance, he calls to them
LEFTY:
We stopping?
TOM:
For tonight, yeah.
DAN:
Funny man.
TOM:
Nah, you want funny, Don...
DAN:
It’s Dan.
TOM:
Oh.. well, yeah. You want funny,
I’ll tell you one.
DAN:
Please no.
TOM:
Nah, Lefty wants to hear it, don’t
you, Lefty?
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 6.
LEFTY:
Don’t I what?
TOM:
Wanna hear a joke?
LEFTY:
Uh, sure-
TOM:
Course you do...
Dan stars to walk away, shaking his head.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 7.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 8.
DAN:
I haven’t thought about that in a
long time. I guess that’s part of
it all.
LEFTY:
Part of what?
DAN:
I don’t know. Searching?
LEFTY:
Maybe. Sure would like to see the
moon again.
DAN:
Well. Maybe you will. I couldn’t
say. Now, take it easy, Cheifie,
alright?
Lefty falls silent, touching the fabric between his fingers
and staring up at the empty, totally black sky. Dan peers
out from under his hat at Lefty, then at Tom.
DAN: (VO)
It’s hard to look at the world as
it is, or as it was. every time i
start to lag i just think of her,
taken away by god knows who or
what, innocent... and.. whatnot, I
can’t even rest. we’ve been at this
for all time and we’ll be at it for
ten times that if we have to. she’s
still out there. unfound. lost.i
can’t take it easy.
He settles back, rearranges himself, and lets his hat fall
over his face again for good.
DAN: (VO)
We close our eyes, but none of us
ever sleep. I never do. You can’t
in these parts. You know you gotta
keep goin’, so there’s no point.
You just gotta keep goin’.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 9.
DAN:
We’re gettin closer, boys, I can
feel it.
TOM:
Uh huh.
DAN:
What’s that?
LEFTY:
Hey, Dan... I was just wondering...
DAN:
You been doing alot of that.
LEFTY:
Well, I was just wondering if you
think maybe she’s on her own now,
or if you think she’s with folk?
DAN:
I’m sure she’s probably with them
still... else I don’t know why she
wouldn’t be trying to find us.
LEFTY:
Oh... well, what if she was?
DAN:
Was what?
LEFTY:
Tryin’ to find us?
TOM:
Yeah, I hadn’t thought about that..
what then?
DAN:
I don’t know. Just gotta keep
looking.
LEFTY:
Well, that goes without saying,
but-
DAN:
Does it?
LEFTY:
Yeah, but-
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 10.
TOM:
What if there’s just more to all
this than you know? What if there’s
stuff we just didn’t figure on?
DAN:
(without turning to confront
them, soldiering on)
Where is this coming from? Why all
these questions? You think I’m
leading the two of you on some wild
goose chase? Pulling the wool over
your eyes? There’s no wool to pull,
you lunkheads. There’s no eyes,
either, while we’re at it. You know
why I’m always pushing on? It’s not
cause I know the way, dumbshit,
it’s cause I want to find her.
TOM:
But what do you know for a fact?
Dan stops briefly and looks over his shoulder with a scowl.
DAN:
NOTHING. Neither do you. I look at
the ground and all I can think
about are footprints that’ve been
blown over. Hand prints on the
rocks that could be hers
He starts to walk on.
DAN: (CONT’D)
They could all be hers, for all we
know, she could be everywhere and
we wouldn’t know! All we DO know is
that we gotta keep goin’ and-
LEFTY:
If we don’t? What happens if we
stop? Do we...?
DAN:
That’s no kinda question. The only
answer is that we don’t stop.
The two others fall silent and Lefty wears a look of shame
as he falls into Dan’s step. As they trudge and climb,
LEFTY: (VO)
I don’t know who she was, but all I
try to think about while we’re out
(MORE)
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 11.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 12.
DAN:
Well, we just came from where
you’re goin’ and let me tell you
there ain’t nothing thattaway.
PLAIN GIRL:
That’s good. That’s what we’re
lookin for.
DAN:
Nothing?
PLAIN GIRL:
You could say that.
PRETTY ONE:
Don’t listen to her, she’s lyin’.
We’re out to get to the other side.
You been that far?
DAN:
Can’t say that... no, I’m not real
sure. Dunno if this thing’ll take
you that far, though, I’ll say
that.
PRETTY ONE:
You boys headed into town?
DAN:
Hoped to make it by sunset.
PRETTY ONE:
Oh, you don’t wanna be there at
night.
DAN:
No?
PRETTY ONE:
There ain’t hardly no one there...
it gets awful weird.
PLAIN GIRL:
Pay her no mind. It’s fine. It’s
just as empty there as it is out
here, though.
DAN:
All empty?
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 13.
PLAIN GIRL:
Well. Depends on the day. You
lookin’ for someone?
DAN:
Who isn’t?
PLAIN GIRL:
Who you looking for?
DAN:
Girl..
PRETTY ONE:
Figures.
DAN:
She was taken away long time ago,
we been searching for what seems
alot longer than that. Here’s a
picture, you seen anyone who looks
like that?
PLAIN GIRL:
She’s pretty.
PRETTY ONE:
She ain’t bad.
DAN:
Seen her?
They look carefully at the picture, then each shake their
heads.
Dan sighs, looks back at the others.
PRETTY ONE:
You boys look beat.
PLAIN GIRL:
Cindy, we gotta-
PRETTY ONE:
Aw shut up. (to the cowboys) you
folks fancy some cookin’ fore you
go in there? Guarantee, you’ll be
hard pressed to find anything
halfway decent in there to eat.
PLAIN GIRL:
Just cause you swiped everything
was there.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 14.
PRETTY ONE:
So?
The cowboys look around.
LUCILLE: (cont’d)
place to bury him. And we gotta
find a preacher man to say the
words, too, you know, but we ain’t
been able to find one in towns
like.. like that one.
LEFTY:
How long you been lookin?
Lucille furrows her brow adorably, then shakes her head.
LUCILLE:
Y’know, I couldn’t say. I can’t be
that long now, but... I can’t
really remember when we started.
Isn’t that funny?
LEFTY:
How can you forget how long it’s
been?
LUCILLE:
Well, I’m sure I don’t know. How
long you been lookin’ for little
girl lost?
Lefty’s turn to furrow his brow. He’s quiet for a moment,
then holds up one of his boots. Etched all over it are
tallymarks. He crosses his feet and turns up the soul of his
other boot. Tallymarks all over that, also. He takes off his
hat and shows her the inside of it- tallymarks.
They look at each other seriously for a moment until
LUCILLE:
You don’t know either, do you?
Over at the other side of camp Beatrice is picking at her
own food, but looks up to see Tom cross by the fire and sit
beside her.
TOM:
So good I thought I’d have some
more.
BEATRICE
That’s gluttony.
TOM:
Are you always this disagreeable?
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 16.
BEATRICE:
No, this is one of my nicer days.
TOM:
Oh, there’s a smile, I saw one.
BEATRICE:
Don’t flatter yourself. You don’t
see alot of people smilin’ around
here, do you?
TOM:
Guess not. Uh, now, correct me if
I’m wrong, here, but it uh, don’t
look like you’re too much in the
spirit of what Lucille there’s out
to do.
BEATRICE:
How do you mean?
TOM:
Buryin’ her daddy.
BEATRICE
Good guess then, it’s her daddy,
not mine. And he’s been rottin for
god knows how long.
TOM:
I don’t smell rot.
BEATRICE
His kinda rot don’t smell.
TOM:
I see.
BEATRICE
Will you look at her?
The two of them look over at Lucille talking with Dan and
Lefty.
TOM:
Can’t say I done much else since
you ladies came to a stop.
BEATRICE:
Precisely.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 17.
TOM:
Hm?
BEATRICE:
You may have noticed we don’t
exactly look like sisters.
TOM:
Ah, nah, I can-
BEATRICE:
We ain’t. Not by blood, I don’t
think.
TOM:
So.
BEATRICE:
So she’s always been beautiful and
innocent and always will be. So
that’s why I’m here. Lookin’ out
for her. Someone’s got to do it.
Into the dust and out of it, she’s
not one to go it alone.
TOM:
Well, until she finds someone.
BEATRICE:
She won’t. She loved her daddy.
That’s about it. And you know as
well as I that that sort of thing
doesn’t happen in these parts.
TOM:
Well, then you’ll find someone to
look after you.
BEATRICE:
Hardly, Mister. There are some that
are made to look after others and
some that are made to be looked
after. One look at me and you can
tell which one I was supposed to
be.
TOM:
Well. I guess that makes two of us.
Beatrice looks at him, puzzled.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 18.
BEATRICE:
You sure about that?
They share an uneasy moment as they look at oneanother
cautiously.
Lucille and Dan are still conversing while Lefty has taken a
depressed turn and is gazing into the little fire.
LUCILLE:
You know if you expect to find her
in town I think you’re pretty much
outta luck.. you’ll probably have
to go well past.
DAN:
We’ll see. Maybe so. I know we’re
gettin close, though. We gotta be.
Maybe we’ll find someone who knows.
LUCILLE:
Good luck. Can I see that picture
again?
Dan hands it over.
LUCILLE:
No... she doesn’t look familiar.
But you know, it’s probably been
awhile. She probably don’t look
like this anymore, poor thing.
DAN:
No.
LUCILLE:
Probably not.
She notices the fabric hanging out of Dan’s vest and reaches
over to seize it.
LUCILLE:
What’s this?
DAN:
That was hers. Er, was hers. Dress
she was wearing when they took her
away. Or that’s what they said.
We’ve found tatters of it here and
there. Or we did. Stopped findin’
them awhile-- what?
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 19.
LUCILLE:
In town... there’s a woman with a
dress made out of this. It’s just
like this.
DAN:
Are you being straight with me?
LUCILLE:
Of course I am.
He grabs her arm.
DAN:
Are you bein’ straight with me?
LUCILLE:
I do not lie.
Lefty is looking up in shock and hope, he and Dan lock eyes
and Dan lets go of Lucille and calls out loudly
DAN:
TOM!
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 20.
BEATRICE:
You boys hear that? We’ll be here
till morning. Either of you change
your mind about that town, you
wanna go back, won’t take much to
catch up with us.
TOM:
You don’t change your mind about
something like this.
BEATRICE:
No. But we’ll be here till morning
anyway. (to Lefty) Hang in there.
Dan looks through the windows at his boys.
DAN:
Hey now, let’s go.
In the darkness, the three cowboys set off for town, no
longer one following the other but the three in time. The
air is tense around them and they don’t speak, just breath.
Tom tries to light up as he walks, but fails.
TOM:
Not a word.
LEFTY:
Tell us a joke, Terry.
TOM:
It’s Tom.
LEFTY:
That’s right. Tell us one.
TOM:
(all the while walking and
trying to light his cigarette)
Alright. Uhh... okay, you’ll like
this one, ah, so there’s this, uh,
this one Sunday that this cowboy
goes to church, and uh, when he
gets there, he realizes that he and
the preacher man were the only ones
present. So the preacher, he kinda
smiles, you know, and since there’s
just the two of them he asks if the
cowboy wants him to go ahead and
preach anyway. So the dude says,
"I’m not too smart, but if I went
to feed my cattle and only one
(MORE)
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 21.
TOM: (cont’d)
showed, I’d feed ’em". So the
preacher man preaches. He goes on
for an hour, then two hours, then
two and a half. Finally, he
finishes up and comes down and asks
the cowboy what he thinks of it
all. And the cowboy, he ah, he
thinks for a minute, then he says
"You know... I’m not real smart,
but if I went to feed my cattle and
only one showed, I sure wouldn’t
feed him all the hay."
Lefty laughs appreciatively, and Tom laughs at it himself.
Dan doesn’t say anything.
They stalk the town. "Lowside of the Road"- Tom Waits
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 22.
LEFTY:
Oh, speak for yourself, Tom, you
don’t know anythin’.
TOM:
What’s that?
LEFTY:
Speak for yourself...
TOM:
Well aren’t we gettin’ ballsy these
days?
DAN:
SHUT UP.
TOM:
(tense warning in his voice)
I think it’s time someone else
started making some decisions
around here.
Dan still has his back to his two companions, but reaches to
his belt for his pistol.
Tom reaches for his.
TOM:
Now don’t be so hasty there-
Dan whirls around and cocks his gun at Tom before Tom can
move a muscle.
DAN:
Now. Are you gonna shut up or are
we gonna have a scene here?
Lefty’s eyes are like saucers.
Dan and Tom are staring intensely at each other until Dan’s
gaze wavers between Lefty and Tom to see directly down the
alley behind them. A girl wearing a blue dress is walking
across it.
Tom and Lefty immediately react to Dan’s expression and turn
to see her stepping out of sight. They take off running.
The chase is quick but tense, and they finally catch her by
rounding a corner and essentially fall onto her. Dan steps
back and grabs the shocked girl by the shoulders to examine
her dress and pulls out the patch in his jacket to compare.
It matches.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 23.
FLASHBACK
The girl in the same faded place, making faces at us or
herself, laughing.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 24.
DAN:
Well if it ain’t you... what about
the dress? Where’d you get the
dress, then?
GIRL:
I uh, I don’t know.
DAN:
Yes you do. Where’d you get the
dress if that ain’t you?
GIRL:
I don’t know! I... someone found
it. Someone brung it to me, said
they found it out in the desert. I
think. That’s all I know. Said they
found it. That’s all I know!
Dan reaches out and grabs her shoulders as if he’s going to
crush her, but he just shakes her jerkily.
DAN:
You SWEAR?
GIRL:
I swear! I SWEAR! I’m SORRY!
LEFTY:
Let her go, Dan! Let her go!
Dan drops her, and she collects herself, looking at Lefty.
GIRL:
(softer this time)
I’m sorry.
She makes a few steps backward, then turns and begins to run
away.
They watch her go. The three of them are stunned.
DAN:
I don’t understand it.
TOM:
Oh, I do, you led us this far and
this is what happens.
DAN:
We were followin’ the trail. You
know as well as I. You know it. All
this time... she’s still out there.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 25.
TOM:
Yeah, back in the DESERT. Back the
OTHER WAY.
DAN:
We don’t know that. She still could
be here. Dressed different.
TOM:
Yeah, and now we got nothin to go
on! Great! Little girl lost is off
bein’ tortured somewheres and we’re
here chasing after little
thieves...
DAN:
Something like that... yeah...
LEFTY:
It’s almost morning...
TOM:
It’s almost morning! Hey! It’s
almost morning! They said they’d
wait until morning... come on, we
can high-tail it outta here with
them, come on...
DAN:
Tom, wait!
Tom takes off running for the town exit, excitably. Dan and
Lefty run in hot pursuit.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 26.
DAN:
Aw now Lefty...
LEFTY:
I MEAN IT!
The two let go of each other and brush themselves off. Tom
is still wallowing in disappointment.
LEFTY:
I have... something I gotta tell
you. Both of you. Um. It ain’t....
easy.
Dan and Tom, breathing hard, just stare as Lefty’s
countenance changes before their eyes.
LEFTY:
It’s not... easy at all. I don’t
know how long ago it was. Not too
long ago. But maybe not. You
remember that time we took up with
that Squaw, over yonder? After
the... well I don’t remember what
it was after. It was before I
started tallying on my boots.
Remember the squaw woman?
DAN:
Yeah, Lefty, I remember the squaw
woman..
LEFTY:
Yeah... and you split for a spell,
cause you thought... I don’t know.
Well, we all split for one day.
Maybe not even that... it.. it
seemed like a day...
Lefty’s eyes start to tear up for a second as he blinks into
the dust that’s blowing into his face.
TOM:
However long it was. It wasn’t long
enough... Lefty would you just put
the gun down for a square second?
We can talk without the firearm.
You know it.
LEFTY:
I think I better hold onto it, Tom.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 27.
TOM:
Suit yourself.
LEFTY:
Anyway-- I-- wish you wouldn’t
innerrupt, I’m gettin... to the
point. We were all split up for a
little while. And I was in that big
canyon, you know. And I was
wonderin’ around all by my lonely,
and uh... I saw her.
TOM:
YOU SAW HER ALL THAT TIME AGO?
LEFTY:
I- yeah-- I told you this... wasn’t
gonna be easy.
DAN:
No shit! What the hell? Why in the
hellblazing tarnation hell didn’t
you say something before? Did they
have her?! Have we been followin’
em right?
LEFTY:
I uh, I told you...
The two cowboys move forward and Lefty brandishes the gun
some more. They stay put.
LEFTY:
This ain’t gonna go down easy. I
uh, I thought I saw her blue, you
know, and I was so happy...
FLASHBACK
Same style, as Lefty clambors down a short rocky trail to
the bottom of a canyon, blue in sight.
LEFTY:(VO)
I.. I just tore down to find her..
As he reaches the bottom he recoils in surprise
28.
FLASHBACK
The girl is propped up against a rock, eyes open, dead.
FLASHBACK
Lefty pushing dirt into the girl’s grave, covering her open,
gloved hand.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 29.
TOM: (cont’d)
ones there. So the preacher, since
there’s just the two of them asks
if the cowboy wants him to go ahead
and preach anyhow. So the dude
says, "I’m not too smart, but if I
went to feed my cattle and only one
showed, I’d feed ’em". So the
preacher man preaches. He goes on
for an hour, then two hours, then
two and three. Finally, he finishes
up......
As Tom is telling his "joke" we take leave of the cowboys.
FADE OUT.
FADE IN.
FLASHBACK
The girl, same flashback style, turning to smile sweetly,
almost wickedly, at us.
Fade out.