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Untitled By Pulkit Jain

INT.HOUSE-BEDROOM-NIGHT We see a door opening slowly in a house. Somebody is peeping, suddenly a hand comes over the camera and we realize somebody is stabbing a person brutally with knife. We see trembling legs of a person, his crying voice for help as If he is suffering too badly. Somebody is watching it from behind and we see these shocking eyes in close up. Screen darkens CUT TO INT.HOUSE-DAY We see, A photo frame of a happy couple Khanna. Beautiful flowers in a vase. A photo frame of a happy trio Khanna couple and little girl Priya kept on a table in a bedroom. Pencil sketches of Vase designs on table. A mystery novel. A calendar with some date. CUT TO INT.HOUSE-KITCHEN-DAY In kitchen,Milk is boiling Something is being kept in pan for frying. We can hear music on radio. We see a lady cooking in kitchen. We see camera follows her fast and suddenly door bell rings. Mrs.Khanna is shocked,turns around as If someone was approaching her from behind. Mrs.Khanna tells Gopal to open the door; he is cutting vegetables with a knife at the other side in the kitchen. We show Vinu(Vinay) who is busy playing scrabble. MRS.KHANNA Gopal dekhna zara GOPAL Ji Memsaab CUT TO

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INT.HOUSE-DINING TABLE-DAY Khanna couple and their son having breakfast on table Gopal the housemaid opens the door, GOPAL Aaiye Priya Didi (He stares her)

Priya enters. Mr.Khanna sees Priya is in bad shape after a hangover. Mr.Khanna is doing his work. He is annoyed seeing Priya. Mr.Khanna stops Priya from directly going to her room. MR.KHANNA Ruko Priya.Ye koi time hai ghar aane ka? Late night parties,pubs ,What are you upto? PRIYA What do you think Im up to,Im not sleeping with.. MR.KHANNA (Mr.Khanna cuts away Priya in between) Shut up!! Dare you utter a word more!: Priya ignores Dad and goes to her room. MR.KHANNA Is that what you call quality time? MRS.KHANNA Do you mean, sab meri galti hai,aapki bhi to beti hai, aap bhi samjha sakte ho.. MR.KHANNA (Adamantly)Shes not, she never was Priya in her bedroom listens this and cries alone. Mr.Khanna gets a client call, client complaining on phone Mr.Khanna on Phone(walking nearby the table) MR.KHANNA Yes,Yes.. Mr.Wadhwani ,No..no Im really sorry for that deal yes aapke 50 lakh aapko mil jayenge..nahi aap, aap suniye to...give us a last chance.. (CONTINUED)

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Gopal hears all this and keeps an ear on the money part. Meanwhile Gopal prepares a coffee cup and is about to offer it to Mr.Khanna. It mistakenly falls on Mr.Khannas shirt, he loses his temper and throws the hot cup of tea on him,gets up and slaps Gopal twice and says, MR.KHANNA Andha hai kya? Kya hai ye..huhhh.. kya hai ye (slaps Gopal) MRS.KHANNA Are suniye to.. MR.KHANNA (looking towards both Swati and Gopal)Tum chup raho..mujhe sab pata hai.. MR.KHANNA Ye sale aajkal ke naukar (short pause)..aur chadao inko sar par (pointing towards Mrs.Khanna) and Mr.Khanna goes off in bad mood. Gopal becomes red and shows abnormal expression of revenge. INT.HOUSE-HALL-EVENING We see a scene of two persons cracking very good jokes and we zoom out to notice its a family TV soap is on air. Mrs.Khanna,Priya and Vinay are watching it and are enjoying the show. Mrs.Khanna gets a call on her mobile. She cuts the call, again the phone rings. She picks it up and walks away from the sofa towards kitchen talking to Shalini (who is actually her ex marital lover) and says, MRS.KHANNA Are nahi nahi Shalini, bas wo cellphone silent pe tha,kaisi ho..,ghar par sab kaise hai ? Nahi..Aaj nahi..aaj nahi ho payega,hes at home(murmurs) We see a hand with Knife approaching at the back of the Mrs.Khanna. Camera follows her fast and suddenly Mrs.Khanna turns in shock. She turns around and see Mr.Khanna coming to take a bottle of water from the fridge,

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MR.KHANNA Aaj khana milega ki nahi...(taunting way) CUT TO INT.HOUSE-DINING TABLE-EVENING PRIYA Papa main kal Goa trip par ja rahi hu MR.KHANNA Ye tum puch rahi ho ya bata rahi ho...waise(Short pause) tumhe nahi lagta ki tumhe mujhse poochna chahiye Priya ignores and doesnt responds. MR.KHANNA Ye ho kya ho raha hai ghar me?(takes a short pause)..Swati.. MRS.KHANNA Ji..maine hi use ijazat di hai.. MR.KHANNA Mujhe puchna laazmi nahi samjha Mrs.Khanna says in taunting manner MRS.KHANNA Mujhe laga aap apne ever important client meetings me busy hoge.. shayad isliye(shrugs off) PRIYA Guys..please(gets up pushing the dinner plate on table roughly ,she gets up to walk away) MR.KHANNA Priya dont walk away, finish off the food Priya doesnt listens and walk to her room.Mr.Khanna gets up from table, stops Priya in between and slaps her.Priya cries to and runs to her bedroom. Vinay is watching all closely. Screen blurs.

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CUT TO INT.HOUSE-PARENTS BEDROOM-NIGHT We see Mr. and Mrs.Khanna in bedroom. Mrs.Khanna is preparing the bed, whereas Mr.Khanna is having his drink and says, MR.KHANNA Tumhe is tarah se baat nahi karni chahiye mujhse,pati hu main tumhara.. MRS.KHANNA Chaliye yaad to hai aapko..waise aapko kya farak padta hai,youve lot of business to take care of. aap to jeena jante nahi ...aur..(Short pause ) khair... MR.KHANNA Kya kehna chahti ho saaf saaf kyu nahi kehti MRS.KHANNA Ab kuch bacha hi kya hai kehne ke liye MR.KHANNA Zabaan mat ladao mujhse..sab janta hu main,whos this Mamaji jis se tum chori chhupe baat karti ho.. Aur Kiske kehne par tumne Priya ko ijazat di? There is a pause in conversation. (As If someone is going to roar.) MRS.KHANNA None of your business MR.KHANNA Sahi kaha tumne (Looks here and there) Jab se tum dono aye ho .Im living in a hell (In very angry state slaps her.) God damn it! Answer my questions,(throws away his drink glass and throws away things from the table on floor) (MORE) (CONTINUED)

CONTINUED: MR.KHANNA (contd) Apne sath sath Priya ko bhi bigad ke rakha hai. Bloody I dont want all such shit in my house (Mr.Khanna raises his voice) MRS.KHANNA Priya beti hai tumhari,is tarike se maarpit achi nahi lagti.. MR.KHANNA She was never my daughter and can never be (in a daunting way).She doesnt exist for me. Sab tumhari wajah se hai.. MRS.KHANNA So why dont you kill us Mr.Khanna goes out of the room jerking off the fight.

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CUT TO INT.HOUSE-HALL-LATE NIGHT We see a shadow of a person walking in the house, probably a male. There is dim light in the hall coming from outside the house. Mr.Khanna lights a cigarette in dark and puts on the lamp. He is fiddling with some of his paper work. After sometime we see Mr.Khanna laid back on the sofa and relaxing putting a book on his chest. There is a sound like a burglar breaking in. Mrs.Khanna wakes up hearing a sound of somebody opening the door. She gets down to main hall,sees Mr.Khanna and the table lamp on. She heaves a sigh of relief and gets down to take a glass of water. MR.KHANNA Kafi raat ho chuki hai so jaiye Mr.Khanna doesnt responds. Mrs.Khanna is about to go as she thinks he is too engrossed in work, and is taking a nap. She goes close to him and takes the papers from his face and is shocked, he is dead.She is taken aback.

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She is scared.She tries to wake up Priya,knocks at her door but her room is locked.She hears some suspicious noise.She runs to close the main door to close it. We rush in the camera fast to the main door as If we dont wish it to open.Somebody from outside tries open it. Suddenly lights goes off.She sees a silhouette of a man holding knife in front window. Mrs.Khanna hides to a store room nearby and finds herself safe for time being. We hear the man walking in the house. She is terrified a lot. She peeps from the room. She sees the shadow of the man coming towards her ,but suddenly shadow goes off in the dark.Mrs.Khanna peeps with some courage only to see a man with jacket killing Gopal and sees a bag of money besides it. The murderer is thrashing knife brutally on the Gopal. Mrs.Khanna keeps her mouth covered with both hands and her eyes are wide open with shock. She sees the trembling legs of the dying man. CUT TO INT.HOUSE-BEDROOM-NIGHT Mrs.Khanna runs for life upstairs.The murderer runs upstairs behind her. We see a door opening slowly.We see somebodys footsteps entering in a room. Mrs.Khanna takes a rod and is about to hit the murderer from the back ,but lights are on, She is shocked to see Priya with a sharp knife and stops suddenly but Priya kills Mrs.Khanna and stabs her many times.Priya approaches Vinay who is under the bed.We see his terrified eyes. CUT TO INT.HOUSE-BEDROOM-NIGHT PRIYA (in Psycho state) Twinkle twinkle little star.. INTERCUT

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INT.PRIYAS ROOM(BLACK AND WHITE,BLURRED) We see a man wearing jacket entering a room. A small girl is playing with her toys. The man is singing Twinkle twinkle little star... And takes out the belt and beats the girl badly and abuses her. CUT TO INT.HOUSE-BEDROOM-NIGHT(CONTINUE) Priya is about to kill Vinay ,but suddenly telephone rings and we hear loud banging at the door. Priya comes to normal state and starts crying as If she is shocked to see 3 dead bodies around and not aware how all this happened and when. ---Screen darkens with Police interrogation on. (Voice over) Police: To ye sab kaise hua? Priya : Mujhe nahi pata ye sab kaise hua,kal raat koi to aya tha jacket pehne.. We see Close up of Priya and her changing expressions and creepy laugh of hers filled in the room with shock and horror. THE END

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