Shot Paper

Shot Take Number on storyboard What happens in it? Useable or not?

Why?
1 1 New shot Mysterious person is Yes, but would need
writing on train map with cutting because is a long
flickering candle light shot.
2 1 4/7 Tilted Pan over names Yes but would need
(actors and creators) cutting, too long

3 2 4/7 Straight on view, pan of Not useable too jumpy

names (actors and
creators)
4 3 4/7 Closer view of tilted shots Useable. Again would
(actors and creators) need cutting.

5 1 24 Title shot, blood dripping Not useable, drips are too

slow. And can see hand

6 1 New Shot Blood stain on Title shot Not useable, blood looks
too fake. Breaks the
verisimilitude.
7 2 24 Title shot, blood dripping Useable shot, quick blood
splat

8 3 24 Title shot, blood dripping Unusable too long, and

talking through shot and
camera unnecessarily
moves.
9 1 2/6 Hannah speaking, mental Unusable, didn’t pause
hospital scene when psychiatrist speaks.

10 2 2/6 Hannah speaking, mental Unusable, Dialogue was

hospital scene wrong.

11 3 2/6 Hannah speaking, mental Unusable- phone goes off

hospital scene
Shot Take Number on storyboard What happens in it? Useable or not?
Why?
12 4 2/6 Hannah speaking, mental Unusable-phone goes off
hospital scene again

13 5 2/6 Hannah speaking, mental Unusable- Smiles at end

hospital scene of scene

14 6 2/6 Hannah speaking, mental Unusable- Hannah starts

hospital scene laughing

15 7 2/6 Hannah speaking, mental Unusable- Couldn’t see

hospital scene the blood on the bandage
clearly
16 8 2/6 Hannah speaking, mental Useable, dialogue is good
hospital scene0 and we see the blood on
the bandage
17 1 10 Tap being turned on Useable- correct framing

18 1 11 Hannah tying hair Unusable- takes too long

tying hair and talks to
camera
19 2 11 Hannah tying hair Unusable- Puts hair in a
bun, instead of pony tail.

20 3 11 Hannah tying hair Unusable- looks at

camera

21 4 11 Hannah tying hair Useable-ties hair

correctly, and stays in
character.
22 1 12 Hannah continues to tie Unusable- looks at the
hair and sees shadow camera
under door in mirror
Shot Take Number on storyboard What happens in it? Useable or not?
Why?
23 2 12 Hannah continues to tie Unusable- Tap was turned
hair and sees shadow on, tap wasn’t turned on.
under door in mirror
23 3 12 Hannah continues to tie Useable- good reaction to
hair and sees shadow the door.
under door in mirror
24 1 15b/c Long pan of her looking Unusable- Can see the
to the door cameraman’s curly hair
and finger.
25 2 15b/c Long pan of her looking Unusable- Can see the
to the door cameraman’s shadow

26 3 15 b/c Long pan of Hannah Unusable-too jumpy

looking at door

27 4 15 b/c Long pan of Hannah Useable- Can see shadow

looking at door jump away quickly

28 1 14 Hannah rubbing her eyes Unusable- bad framing.

29 2 14 Hannah rubbing face Unusable- not close

enough.

30 3 14 Hannah rubbing face Useable- Close enough

31 1 16 Hannah thinking there’s Unusable- not the right

nothing there expression

32 2 16 Hannah thinking there’s Unusable- not the right

nothing there expression
Shot Take Number on storyboard What happens in it? Useable or not?
Why?
33 3 16 Hannah thinking there’s Unusable- not the right
nothing there expression

34 4 16 Hannah thinking there’s Useable-right expression

nothing there

35 1 17 Hannah Washing face Unusable- looks directly

at camera, and antagonist
is not seen enough
36 2 17 Hannah washing face Unusable- Too close

37 3 17 Hannah washing face Useable- framing was

correct

38 1 18a/18b Hannah drying face Unusable-Bad framing

39 2 18a Hannah drying face Useable

40 2 18b Hannah drying face, and Useable- but looks too

figure appear behind surreal

41 3 18a Hannah Drying face Useable

42 3 18b Hannah drying face and Unusable- Mala speaks,

figure appears behind and reaction was too slow

43 1 New Shot Bug Eye lens over Useable-creative shot

camera, of Mala with
knife
Shot Take Number on storyboard What happens in it? Useable or not?
Why?
44 1 19/20/21 Attacker attacks Unusable- Hannah opens
protagonist door, door is meant to be
closed.
45 2 19/20/21 Attacker attacks Unusable- Hannah opens
protagonist door, door is meant to be
closed and fighting
looked staged
46 3 19 Attacker attacks Useable
protagonist

47 4 20 Attacker attacks Useable

protagonist

48 5 20/21 Attacker attacks Useable

protagonist

49 1 20 Protagonist elbows Unusable-Looks

Attacker (Close up) unrealistic and breaks 180
degree rule.
50 2 20 Protagonist elbows Unusable- Looks
Attacker (Close up) unrealistic and breaks 180
degree rule.
51 3 19/20/21 Attacker Attacks Unusable- Too slow and
protagonist unrealistic.

52 1 22 Shaking Door knob, with Unusable-Looks

reflection in the unrealistic, not panicky
background.
53 2 22 Shaking Door knob, with Unusable-Looks
reflection in the unrealistic, not panicky
background.
54 1 23 Cutting arm scene Unusable-Looks
unrealistic
Shot Take Number on storyboard What happens in it? Useable or not?
Why?
55 4 22 Shaking door knob, with Useable-looks more
reflection in background realistic

56 2 23 Cutting arm scene Unusable- looks

unrealistic.

57 3 23 Cutting arm scene Unusable- Cut in wrong

place

58 4 23 Cutting arm scene Unusable- Not enough

blood

59 5 23 Cutting arm scene Useable- was too slow but

can be edited.

60 6 23 Cutting arm scene Unusable-Not enough

blood on knife

61 1 New Shot POV shot of rubbing face Unusable- too short

62 2 New Shot POV shot of rubbing face Unusable- Mala runs

forward

63 3 New shot POV shot of rubbing face Unusable- Too quick

64 4 New shot POV shot of rubbing face Useable-correctly framed

and duration was correct.

65 1 18/19/20/21 Attacker Attacks Unusable-doesn’t scream

protagonist
Shot Take Number on storyboard What happens in it? Useable or not?
Why?
66 2 18/19/20/21 Attacker attacks Unusable-Mala goes into
protagonist character too quickly

67 3 18/19/20/21 Attacker Attacks Useable

protagonist

68 4 18/19/20/21 Attacker Attacks Unusable- camera shakes

protagonist and Hannah screams into
towel
69 1 New shot Hannah is running after Useable
Mala at train station

70 1 New shot Hannah is running after Unusable- Too shaky.

Mala, used dolly for
tracking.
71 1 1 Hannah is running after Useable
Mala at train station

72 1 New shot Train going by Unusable- Mala goes into

scene when not needed to.

73 1 New shot Train going by, with Unusable- Mala is not in

Hannah running with it the scene.

74 1 3 Close up of shoes running Useable

by.

75 1 New shot Canted angle, depth of Useable

field, with train sign in
foreground (in focus), and
running in background.
76 1 5a/5b Hannah stops running to Unusable-Hannah doesn’t
catch breath, camera pans run into frame.
back and forth.
Shot Take Number on storyboard What happens in it? Useable or not?
Why?
77 2 5a/5b Hannah stops running to Unusable- Runs too far,
catch breath, camera and looks at camera.
pans.
78 3 5a/5b Hannah stops running to Useable
catch breath, camera
pans.
79 1 5a/5b (New shot) Hannah stops running to Useable- Hannah doesn’t
catch breath, camera is in stop. But we can edit on
a different angle Apple Mac’s.
80 1 5a/5b (new shot) POV shot of Hannah’s Unusable – too jumpy,
view, her chasing the person in the background
runner. who wasn’t there before –
non-continuity.
81 1 8 Hannah walking up her Unusable- Too dark to see
path to her house anything

82 2 8 Hannah walking up her Unusable- Too dark to see

path to her house anything

83 3 8 Hannah walking up her Unusable- Too dark to see

path to her house anything

84 1 9 Hannah opening door and Useable

closing door. Close up of
lock.
85 2 9 Hannah opening door and Unusable- Took too long.
closing door. Close up of
lock. And her locking
chain
86 1 New shot Throws badge on the Unusable- See back of
table badge rather than front.

87 2 New shot Throws badge on the Useable

table
Shot Take Number on storyboard What happens in it? Useable or not?
Why?
88 1 New shot Fight scene, grabs leg, Unusable- too slow (was
Hannah falls back, and a practice shot)
kicks Mala, Hannah tries
to escape, Mala grabs
knife
89 2 New Shot Fight scene, grabs leg, Unusable- Mala doesn’t
Hannah falls back, and grab Hannah’s leg in
kicks Mala, Hannah tries time.
to escape, Mala grabs
knife
90 3 New shot Fight scene, grabs leg, Unusable- kicking looks
Hannah falls back, and unrealistic
kicks Mala, Hannah tries
to escape, Mala grabs
knife
91 4 New Shot Start of Fight scene Unusable- Mala
unnecessarily speaks.

92 5 New shot Fight scene, grabs leg, Useable- Kick looks

Hannah falls back, and unrealistic. But can cut,
kicks Mala, Hannah tries and use titles in between
to escape, Mala grabs
knife
93 6 New Shot Fight scene, grabs leg, Useable- Good grab and
Hannah falls back, and push, but unrealistic kick.
kicks Mala, Hannah tries Bad framing at the
to escape, Mala grabs beginning but can cut.
knife
94 1 New Shot Fight scene, grabs leg, Unusable- Characters
Hannah falls back, and forget their lines.
kicks Mala, Hannah tries
to escape, Mala grabs
knife, (close up of feet)
Shot Take Number on storyboard What happens in it? Useable or not?
Why?
95 2 New shot Fight scene, grabs leg, Unusable- Looks
Hannah falls back, and unrealistic.
kicks Mala, Hannah tries
to escape, Mala grabs
knife, (close up of feet)
96 3 New shot Fight scene, grabs leg, Useable- some bits are
Hannah falls back, and unrealistic, however,
kicks Mala, Hannah tries when Mala grabs knife is
to escape, Mala grabs a good shot.
knife, (close up of feet)
97 1 New shot Close up of knife going Useable
into sink

98 1 New Shot Extreme close up of Useable

knife, attacks grabs it.

99 1 New Shot Close up of Mala Unusable- looks

grabbing Hannah’s foot. unrealistic.

100 2 New Shot Close up of Mala Useable

grabbing Hannah’s foot

101 1 20 Close Mid shot of Useable

Hannah elbowing Mala.

102 1 New shot Mala going after Hannah Unusable- Too slow.
with knife

103 1 12a/b Hannah looking into Unusable- Bad framing.

mirror thinks she sees
something under door.
104 2 15b Light under door Useable-however Hannah
speaks but we can
change.
Shot Take Number on storyboard What happens in it? Useable or not?
Why?
105 3 15b/c Light underneath door. Unusable- too quick and
Pan jumpy.

106 4 15b/c Light underneath door. Unusable- Can see

Pan Yasmin’s Shadow.

107 5 15b/c Light underneath door. Unusable- Can see

Pan Yasmin’s Shadow.

108 6 15b/c Light underneath door. Useable

Pan

109 1 New shot Mala getting up and close Useable

up Knife up against
Hannah’s neck and
pushes Mala near the sink
110 1 New Shot Mid shot of Mala Grabing Useable- but may cut
Hannah and Hannah some bits out.
Elbowing Mala back.
Knife goes into sink
111 3 New Shot Grabbing foot (canted Useable
angle) with kick

112 4 New Shot Grab and Kick Unusable- looks

unrealistic.

113 1 New Shot Kunal looking over Unusable- Forget to zoom

footage (acting as a out and Kunal’s head gets
physiatrist) in the way.
114 2 New shot Kunal looking over Unusable- Kunal head
footage (acting as a gets in the way, Reverse
physiatrist) zoom is too quick.
115 3 New shot Kunal looking over Unusable- Zooms by
footage (acting as a accident then reverse
physiatrist) zoom.
Shot Take Number on storyboard What happens in it? Useable or not?
Why?
116 4 New Shot Kunal looking over Useable-but acting is
footage (acting as a unrealistic.
physiatrist)
117 1 New Shot Close up of Kunal writing Useable-But need to cut
something on paper bits out

118 1 New Shot Voice over of Kunal Useable

saying ‘What do you
remember of it’ for one of
the mental illness scenes.
119 1 New Shot Yasmin’s Mum acts as the Useable
Physiatrist. Watches over
clip of Hannah
120 1 New Shot Yasmin’s Mum writing Useable
something down on a
paper pad. ( Close up)
121 1 New shot Hannah in mental Unusable- framing isn’t
hospital new dialogue. correct

122 2 New Shot Hannah in mental Unusable- Lighting is too

hospital new dialogue. dark, doesn’t match other
footage.
123 3 New Shot Hannah in mental Unusable- could hear
hospital new dialogue. sounds in the background
of children.
124 4 New Shot Hannah in mental Unusable-Hannah laughs.
hospital new dialogue.

125 5 New Shot Hannah in mental Useable

hospital new dialogue.

126 6 New Shot Hannah in mental Useable

hospital new dialogue.