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THI IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Opinion essay
(Mt s ti liu gi l Argumentative essays)
I. Mt s cu hi thng gp
- To what extent do you agree or disagree?
(Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable. To
what extent do you agree or disagree?)
- What do you think?
(Some British families decide not to buy televisions because they influence
the development of the creativity of children. What do you think?)
- Do you agree or disagree?
(Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work
in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would
benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or
disagree?)
- To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
(We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be
concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you
agree or disagree with this statement?)
II. La chn cch vit:
i vi dng bi Opinion, bi mun hi v qua im ca b n v mt v
o . Cng vic ca bn l phi a ra quan im ca mnh xuyn sut ton b
bi vit (c m bi (introduction) v kt lun (conclusion)), bn c th ng
(totally/ absolutely/ completely + agree), khng ng (totally/ absolutely/
completely + disagree) hoc ng mt phn (partly agree).

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- Vi vic ng hon ton (totally/ absolutely/ completely + agree) hoc
khng ng (totally/ absolutely/ completely + disagree) thng thng c
th c gi l bi vit mt mt (one side of the argument).
- Cn i vi vic ng mt phn (partly agree) thng thng c th gi l
bi vit hai mt (both sides of the argument).
Mt s kin cho rng, vit mt mt th d hn l bi vit hai mt, hoc l ngi
mi bt u th nn vit mt mt. Theo kin ca mnh, la chn cch vit mt
mt hay hai mt i vi bi lun Opinion cn ph thuc vo u bi a ra, v
cch vit no cng c ci thun li v kh kh ri

- i vi kiu vit mt mt, c th bn d tm hn, nhng support cho cc


ideas trong li vit ny c th kh khn hn v cng kh trin khai hn.
- i vi kiu vit hai mt th c th kh tm hn, nhng r rng vi bi vit
hai mt th bi vit chc chn phong ph hn v bn cng khoe c vn
t vng ca mnh mt cch hiu qu hn.
V quan trng nht, theo mnh, la chn li vit no th phi bm vo
bi a ra
V d vi bi nh sau:
Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in
every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
(Cc trng i hc nn chp nhn s sinh vin nam v n bng nhau trong tt c
cc mn hc. Trong mt chng mc no bn ng hay khng ng ?)
bi trn r rng a ra mt vn rt thiu thc t v g

h kh

th

thc hi c. Nh vy chng ta c c vit theo li hai mt ng mt phn


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(ngha l vn ng h kin trn mt vi im no ) th s rt kh khn tm
cng nh rt kh support cho cc ideas a ra.
Chng ta hy cng xem M bi v kt lu i vi bi trn m Simon
vit:
Intro:
In my opinion, men and women should have the same educational opportunities.
However, I do not agree with the idea of accepting equal proportions of each
gender in every university subject.
Conclusion:
In conclusion, the selection of university students should be based on merit, and it
would be both impractical and unfair to change to a selection procedure based on
gender.
Thm mt v d na :
Some people believe that exams are an inappropriate way of measuring
stude ts performance and should be replaced by continuous assessment. Do
you agree or disagree with this view?
(Mt s ngi tin rng thi c l cch thc khng ph hp nh gi nng lc ca
sinh vin v nn thay th bng hnh thc nh gi thng xuyn. Bn ng hay
khng ng vi kin trn?)
bi a ra mt vn v vic nh gi nng lc ca sinh vin bng thi c. R
rng vic thi c gy ra rt nhiu p lc cho sinh vin, n cng khng nh gi c
nng lc sinh vin mt cch trn vn, tuy nhin khng th b thi c v nu b sinh
vin s th vi vic hc hnh (students could lose the good study habits and
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sense of discipline they had when they were in a formal academic structure).
Mc d vy th chng ta chng c th xem xt hnh thc kim tra nng lc sinh
vin mt cch thng xuyn (continuous assessment) gim bt p lc thi c
cho sinh vin (to relieve the students of exam pressure).
Chng ta hy cng xem phn m bi v kt lun m Dominic Cole vit
nh:
Intro:
There is some dispute whether the best method of assessing students is to use
examinations or some form of continuous assessment. This is a complex issue and
my belief is that there is probably no one method that applies to all educational
systems.
Conclusion:
In conclusion, while continuous assessment may be fairer in some contexts, there
are

still

times

when

traditional

exams

may

be

more

appropriate.

A possible compromise would be to use both forms of testing together, allowing


teachers to reward both ability and hard work.
III. Cu trc bi vit Opinion:
y l li khuyn ca Simon i vi cu trc mt bi lun Opinion:
IELTS Writing Task 2: agree, disagree, or both?
For 'agree or disagree' essays, do you think you should give both sides of the argument
or just one side? The answer is that you can do either.
A) Essay structure for one side of the argument:

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1. Introduction: topic + your opinion (either agree or disagree)
2. First idea to support your opinion
3. Second idea to support your opinion
4. Conclusion: repeat your opinion
B) Essay structure for giving both sides:
1. Introduction: topic + say that you 'partly agree'
2. On the one hand,...
3. On the other hand,...
4. Conclusion: repeat that you accept elements of both arguments
Remember: it's very important to get the introduction right. This tells the examiner
whether you are going to give one side of the argument or both sides.

Mt li khuyn rt quan trng ca Simon na nh:


IELTS Writing Task 2: opinion, not discussion
If the question asks whether you agree or disagree, it is asking for your opinion. You
should express your opinion in the introduction, and support it in the rest of the essay.
Dont structure an opinion essay like this:
1. Introduction
2. Paragraph supporting the opposite opinion
3. Paragraph supporting my opinion
4. Conclusion
The problem with this essay structure is that paragraph 2 is not consistent with my
opinion. This is a discussion essay structure!
Think of it this way: your task when you answer an agree or disagree question is to
persuade the reader that your view is right. Each paragraph should defendyour opinion.

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Discuss essay
I. Mt s cu hi thng gp
- Discuss both views and give your opinion
a ra qua im ca b

y b

u v cc qua im v

Example: Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to


entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to
educate. Discuss both views and give you own opinion.
- In your opinion, do the drawbacks of outweigh the benefits? heo qua
im ca b
h
im bt i cac h h h cc im t ch cc
khng?).
Example: Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a
useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having
an adverse effect on the people who play them.
In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?
- Is this a positive or negative development?
tiu cc

y s ht tri t ch cc hay

Example: In some countries, using the internet in schools is getting more


popular. Is this a positive or negative development?
- Do you think there are more advantages or disadvantages to this trend?
c h r
i ch hiu h hay bt i hiu h i vi xu h
y .
Example: In many countries recently young single people have been living far
from their parents, from the time they began studies or work and until they
married. Do you think there are more advantages or disadvantages to this
trend?

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a chn c ch vit
i vi dng bi iscuss ny nhn chung l chng ta cn phi vit kh th n bi
vi
Body 1: Drawbacks (Benefits) hoc mt ca vn
Body 2: Advantages (Disadvantages) + your opinion hoc tr nh by mt c n l i.
t lu l c mt s h n b t b n a ra quan i m m ch y u c u
b n phn t ch mt ca vn
d mt s cu hi nh:
- Discuss
- Is this a positive or negative development?
y th bn kh

c th hin quan im ca mnh.

t s v d v m bi v t lun i vi bi lun d n

iscuss

1. Example 1: Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to


entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate.
Discuss both views and give you own opinion.
Intro: People have different views about the role and function of museums. In my
opinion, museums can and should be both entertaining and educational.
Body 1: Entertaining
Body 2: Educational
Conclusion: In conclusion, it seems to me that a good museum should be able to
offer an interesting, enjoyable and educational experience so that people can have
fun and learn something at the same time.

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h vy i vi d
ro

h
u

bi y

tro b

hi vit

c u v

ara hrase v u ch chu

ii thiu v hai mt ca v m ch
ch

tro

ro

c u y b

i ca imo

ca u bi

ta s th hi tr

kh th

hi
bi

a thm qua im ca m h

o c usio

cch khc ara hrase

cu tr c

kh

i qua im ca m h

ic u

ca h m bi kh

su

ort cho qua im o th

i mt

c a ra qua

im khc .
i s tro

bi khc b

i vi h th

vit ody

bi m i ody s vit v mt ca v

d
Body 1: On the one hand, it can be argued that the main role of a museum is
to entertain.

Body 2: On the other hand, some people argue that museums should focus on
education.

2. Example 2: Some people believe that studying at university or college is the


best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job
straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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Intro: When they finish school, teenagers face the dilemma of whether to get a job
or continue their education. While there are some benefits to getting a job straight
after school, I would argue that it is better to go to college or university.
Body 1: The option to start work straight after school is attractive for several
reasons.

Body 2: On the other hand, I believe that it is more beneficial for students to
continue their studies.
( h hi qua im m h su

ort tro

c u to ic se te ce)

Conclusion: For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that students are
more likely to be successful in their careers if they continue their studies beyond
school level.
m

chu

ch

ta vit theo cu tr c sau :

Intro: 2 sentences
Body1: Topic sentence 1
- Idea 1
o Supporting 1
- Idea 2
o Supporting 2
Body2: Topic sentence 2 + Your opinion
- Idea 1
o Supporting 1
- Idea 2
o Supporting 2
o c usio

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wo-part question (or series questions) essay

Simon:
1. r

auses

o utio s

i dng bi nhiu c u hi th dng Causes

olutions l rt ph bin, u bi a

ra mt vn , v s hi v nguyn nh n (Causes) v ii php (Solutions)


d: In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What
problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that
could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.
i vi dng bi ny chng ta s vit m i kh th n bi tng ng vi tng c u hi,
c th nh sau
Intro: It is true that people in industrialised nations can expect to live longer
than ever before. Although there will undoubtedly be some negative
consequences of this trend, societies can take steps to mitigate these potential
problems.
Sentance 1

ara hrase

i to ic ca u bi c

se te ce ca to b bi u v khi c c u y
ay v ch

c th i y

o ic

i c hi hiu c

ta h vit

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n nh c c d n bi trc cu

Sentence 2:

th hi n ni dun nh vit tron

ca ph n m bi b n s ph i

h thn bi l

c th

y ody : c c

nguyn nhn (Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences


of this trend) v ody : l i i ph p societies can take steps to mitigate these
potential problems).

Body 1: As people live longer and the populations of developed countries grow
older, several related problems can be anticipated (Topic sentence). The main
issue is that there will obviously be more people of retirement age who will be
eligible to receive a pension. The proportion of younger, working adults will be
smaller, and governments will therefore receive less money in taxes in relation to
the size of the population. In other words, an ageing population will mean a
greater tax burden for working adults. Further pressures will include a rise in
the demand for healthcare, and the fact young adults will increasingly have to
look after their elderly relatives.

Body 2: There are several actions that governments could take to solve the
problems described above (topic sentence). Firstly, a simple solution would be to
increase the retirement age for working adults, perhaps from 65 to 70.
Nowadays, people of this age tend to be healthy enough to continue a
productive working life. A second measure would be for governments to
encourage immigration in order to increase the number of working adults who
pay taxes. Finally, money from national budgets will need to be taken from other
areas and spent on vital healthcare, accommodation and transport facilities for
the rising numbers of older citizens.
o c usio

mt c u ara hrase

i c u th

ca bi

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In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are
certain to arise as the populations of countries grow older.

2. r

u bi kh

hi tr

d : There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we
need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the
international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
i bi ny b n v n tri n hai m i h thn bi t n

n vi t n

cu hi ca bi
d

: Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the

environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can


individual people do?
bi ny c th
thn bi m i h

i l series questions v r rn b n c th vit

i i quyt t n ph n

Body 1: Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the
environment.
Body 2: What can governments do to address these problems?
Body 3: What can individual people do?
h

cn i v s l n t vn

m i h bi vit h n qu di nh

d : More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries
to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing and medicine.
Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people, rich

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countries are stealing from poor countries. Others feel that this is only part of
the natural movement of workers around the world.
+ What is your opinion?
+ Do you think rich countries should pay poorer countries for the people they
encourage to come?
+ What other measures could rich countries take to encourage qualified people
to stay and help develop their own countries?
y l d n cu hi h i h c mt ch t nhn nu b n ch
s nhn ra l ch n ta c th vit ody

cho

cu hi u v ody

cu hi th
tr li cu

hi th
Body 1:
+ What is your opinion?
+ Do you think rich countries should pay poorer countries for the people they
encourage to come?
Body 2:
+ What other measures could rich countries take to encourage qualified people
to stay and help develop their own countries?

3. r

h c bit

Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of
technology.

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In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people
make? Has this been a positive or negative development?
ho t h

th u bi tr d

bi y th h

c u h i thc t th

im c bit y c u h i th

positive or negative development?

i thuc v d

bi y ch

kh th

th

bi tr

vit theo kiu

ta v
i cho t
kh th

tri khai
c uh i
bi ca d

Has this been a

bi

iscuss

bi b h th

kh th
bi

m i kh

bi th

iscuss h

i vi
b

hy

i tro

ara ra h c th h sau
Body 1: Technology has had an impact on relationships in business, education and
social life. Firstly, telephones and the Internet allow business people in different
countries to interact without ever meeting each other. Secondly, services like
Skype create new possibilities for relationships between students and teachers. For
example, a student can now take video lessons with a teacher in a different city or
country. Finally, many people use social networks, like Facebook, to make new
friends and find people who share common interests, and they interact through
their computers rather than face to face.
Body 2: On the one hand, these developments can be extremely positive.
Cooperation between people in different countries was much more difficult when
communication was limited to written letters or telegrams. Nowadays,
interactions by email, phone or video are almost as good as face-to-face meetings,
and many of us benefit from these interactions, either in work or social
contexts. On the other hand, the availability of new communication technologies
can also have the result of isolating people and discouraging real interaction.
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For example, many young people choose to make friends online rather than mixing
with their peers in the real world, and these virtual relationships are a poor
substitute for real friendships.
th thy r

V c b

ody

ch

ta v

t ch hai mt ca v

i vi m i bi chng ta l i c cch x

l khc nhau, b n c vit theo cch no b n thy ph


hp vi

c, theo cch no m b n cm thy c

th ph din ht c
IELTS l k thi kim tra

c ting Anh ca mnh (v

c ting Anh ca

b n,). Vic c nhiu cc bi lun m u ca Simon, ca


Dominic Cole b n s hiu r c cch x
d

, v gip b

c c ci h

IELTS Writing task 2.

r h

l t ng
v m i

Rt kh a ra c mt cng th c chung cho tt


c cc bi vit V m h c
hi ca b
cng ca b

v n c nhn m nh r ng

i vi vic hc quyt nh thnh

CHC CC B N HC TT !
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