Peer Feedback on Music Video

1. Favourite images and connotations:

All great shots, fits well with genre. Love the ending & the shot where she
isnt lip syncing (1:45)
Good variety of shot types, ending was poetic, setting was perfect
Love the grading
The beach scene
Good ending and beginning circular narrative
Fits in well with the genre, nice ending.
Loved the ending and the pull focuses taken of her and trees

2. What aspects of the video promote the track:

Very clearly shows her loneliness from colour + setting
Shows loneliness and the lip syncing
The setting and expression of sadness and loneliness
The close ups of her emotion.
The setting and the sorrow portrayed by the girls lip syncing.
The pace suits perfectly

3. How does the video use musical genre conventions:

Setting? The ending of the video is quite poetic and sad, like the song.
Model + clothing suits with the emotion + genre

4. Creative use of technical skills (controlled use of camera; variety of shot sizes; editing
techniques; lip sync; pace and rhythm; effects):
Nice lip syncing with great editing and effects.
Nice variety of shots
Love the colour
Nice lip syncing, good shots
Good colour grading and different types of shots, plus lip syncing is very
good.
Good lip syncing and use of focus

5. Areas for improvement:

Maybe the ending? The waves look great but I think I preferred if it didnt go
back down to the sea? Otherwise great!

Maybe put a title at the end and shorten song cos too long clip
Some shots were shaky ie. the pans around the tree and the ending. Ending
was too long but I liked that you looked back down to the sea.
Perhaps where the camera lifts at the end could be smoother.
Some shaky footage, image seems overexposed, maybe die down the
effects?

6. Should any adjustments be made to the colouring?

No! Really nice colouring with a great dreamy atmosphere! Love the
purple, glowyness.
NO. Suits the genre well.
Maybe the effects (Colour)
No dont change it suits the song, story and genre very well.
No love it, fits in well and continues all the way through.
Good grading
No, suits the video well.