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The biggest reason for objecting to extreme sports is that they can be very dangerous and can sometimes kill people. More than that, it is not just the
sportspeople who are in danger, but spectators too can be badly injured. If, for example, a Formula 1 car crashes, the driver may be hurt and it is
possible that people in the crowd will be too. Because of this danger, it is understandable why people want the government to ban these sports.
The opposite argument is that people should be free to do whatever risk they want. So, if someone wants to jump out of a plane, then they should be
allowed to and the government cannot say what they should do. Many dangerous sports are also not very risky and it is as dangerous doing everyday
activities such as crossing the road or cooking a meal as bungee jumping.
I think that the government should regulate dangerous sports, but it should not ban them. It should also make certain that there is as little danger as
possible because safety is the most important thing. This is most important for young children.
Directions: Read through this sample essay. It is well structured and addresses the question, but it is weak on vocab. Can you see what the
problems are?
We live in a world where health and safety is more and more important One of the signs of this is the demand that dangerous sports should be banned.
While I understand that argument, my view is that people should be free to do whatever sports they want.
The biggest reason for objecting to extreme sports is that they can be very dangerous and can sometimes kill people. More than that, it is not just the
sportspeople who are in danger, but spectators too can be badly injured. If, for example, a Formula 1 car crashes, the driver may be hurt and it is
possible that people in the crowd will be too. Because of this danger, it is understandable why people want the government to ban these sports.
The opposite argument is that people should be free to do whatever risk they want. So, if someone wants to jump out of a plane, then they should be
allowed to and the government cannot say what they should do. Many dangerous sports are also not very risky and it is as dangerous doing everyday
activities such as crossing the road or cooking a meal as bungee jumping.
I think that the government should regulate dangerous sports, but it should not ban them. It should also make certain that there is as little danger as
possible because safety is the most important thing. This is most important for young children.
Directions: Read through this sample essay. It is well structured and addresses the question, but it is weak on vocab. Can you see what the
problems are?
We live in a world where health and safety is more and more important One of the signs of this is the demand that dangerous sports should be banned.
While I understand that argument, my view is that people should be free to do whatever sports they want.
The biggest reason for objecting to extreme sports is that they can be very dangerous and can sometimes kill people. More than that, it is not just the
sportspeople who are in danger, but spectators too can be badly injured. If, for example, a Formula 1 car crashes, the driver may be hurt and it is
possible that people in the crowd will be too. Because of this danger, it is understandable why people want the government to ban these sports.
The opposite argument is that people should be free to do whatever risk they want. So, if someone wants to jump out of a plane, then they should be
allowed to and the government cannot say what they should do. Many dangerous sports are also not very risky and it is as dangerous doing everyday
activities such as crossing the road or cooking a meal as bungee jumping.
I think that the government should regulate dangerous sports, but it should not ban them. It should also make certain that there is as little danger as
possible because safety is the most important thing. This is most important for young children.