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Essay Types
Persuasive | Critical | Narrative/Personal | Descriptive | Reflective | Argumentative | C
ompare and Contrast
Cause and Effect | Research | Expository/Informational | College Admissions
Tactics
- Fear associations
- Nonequivalent emotional associations
- Happiness
- Health
- Security
- Love/Companionship
- Popularity
- Success/Wealth
- Status/Fame
- Adventure
- Patriotism
- Bandwagon
- Build of cultural perspective
Used by
- Companies
- Organizations
- Politicians
- Any supplier
Methods
- Product placement
- TV ads
- Merchandising
- Word of mouth
- Social networking pages
- YouTube ads
- Sponsorships: Athletic, good cause, community event
Ethics
- Influencing children
- Negative personal attacks
- Create a society that confuses needs and wants
After you have brainstormed your essay, choose an idea and ask yourself:
1. How is this idea in line with the subject matter? Advertisers use many
psychological tactics to persuade viewers.
2. Can I create an interesting title and strong thesis/premise from this idea?
"Advertising: What You Dont Realize"
3. Where can I find the evidence I need to support this idea? Internet sites, books
about advertisement trends, marketing blogs/forums, watching television
commercials, movie trailers.
4. What type of evidence might support my premise? Marketing critics, awards in
best advertisements, advertisement news articles.
5. What conclusion can I draw from this idea? What techniques audiences should
be aware of while viewing advertisements.
6. Which type of essay would work best with this idea?
o A description
o A comparison
o Cause and effect
o A narrative
o Explaining a process
o An argument
o A critique
Start writing an essay with an outline, using the different elements of your essay
as a template.
Title: Your topic (e.g. "Advertising: What You Dont Realize?")
Introduction: Premise and Supporting Points.
Body
o Point 1: Supporting Evidence
o Point 2: Supporting Evidence
o Point 3: Supporting Evidence
Conclusion: How your evidence led you to your conclusion
Works Cited
The Essay Introduction
The introduction is the first paragraph of your essay and introduces the essay topic to
your reader. Although your essay topic serves as your title, it isn't necessary to repeat
it in your essay introduction. The essay introduction presents your topic and tells the
reader what supporting points follow within the essay body.
For example:
Advertising influences many decisions people make in modern society, yet people
rarely stop to consider the affects of its influence. A passive TV viewer is told how to
live life from television ads, but a smart consumer holds the power over their own
decisions. Advertisers use many tactics that tell audiences that they need more
products and services. By understanding advertising techniques, passive viewers can
turn into smart consumers and decide for themselves where their hard earned money
is spent.
The Essay Body
The body is where you develop the topic that you introduced in your introduction.
Start a new paragraph every time you discuss a new point. Make the body "flow" by
introducing the next paragraph of your essay at the end of the previous one. When
you're satisfied that you have made your points, move on to the essay conclusion.
If you are using outside sources, cite your sources and add them to your works cited
page as you use them.
The Essay Conclusion
Although it's often overlooked, the conclusion is an important part of your essay. It's
the last paragraph of your essay and your last chance to drive home your point of view
as well as an indicator of how well you've organized your thoughts. Generally the
conclusion is a summary of your essay body and/or any closing thoughts or ideas.
Once you are sure that your essay "makes your point" and that you have caught and
corrected any errors in formatting, spelling, punctuation, and grammar, your "first
draft" magically becomes your finished essay.
while a thesis statement is an assertion that defines the point (or argument) of your
essay. A thesis statement is your answer to the question your
essay explores.
For example, think of a thesis statement as the opening
statement in a trial. The question is "who done it?" As the
prosecuting attorney, your thesis statement lays out your
case for your reader, the jury. The defendant had motive,
opportunity, and access to the weapon or method used to commit the crime. Your
opening statement or thesis introduces this evidence to your reader. The trial (body of
your essay) supports your evidence and proves the validity of your argument.
A Good Thesis Statement Follows Certain Criteria:
It is easily identifiable: It clearly defines what follows in the essay body and
tells the reader what to expect from the rest of your essay.
It is narrow: It brings focus to the central point of your essay.
It is an assertion: It "takes a stand" on a certain subject and shows the strength
of your argument.
It is specific: It is the conclusion that is supported point by point in the body of
your essay.
Advantages of Using a Thesis Statement
Just as a thesis statement puts your paper into focus for the reader, it can also help you
to organize and develop your argument by describing the main point of your paper in
one or two sentences. As you write your paper, your thesis statement can serve as a
reference that keeps your paper on topic.
A thesis statement can serve as a short outline of your topic. It asks the question, gives
the answer, and introduces your evidence in the order it will be presented.
Exploring the Thesis Statement
Example 1: "Miss Rose, who is a notorious criminal and a three-time loser, mugged
Professor Plum in the library with the bookends."
Example 1 is not a thesis statement. Although it is an assertion, it does not clearly
define what is to follow in the body of the essay and it is unsupported by any
evidence.
Example 2: "Although Miss Rose appears clueless, her nail file and stiletto heels are
the evidence that it was she who broke into the library and literally put her enemy,
Professor Plum, in between two heavy copper book-ends.
Example 2 is a well-structured thesis statement that:
1. Identifies your argument
2. Is specific
3. Is narrow (stays on topic)
4. Is an assertion
Also, note that example 2 uses an introductory clause to acknowledge that there is
another "side" to the argument (Miss Rose appears to be clueless). This is a frequently
employed technique that both identifies and attempts to negate an alternative theory,
even using it to make your argument appear stronger.
The body of this essay would provide the details that connect Miss Rose's nail file and
shoes to the crime, thereby proving that she was the culprit.
Thesis Statement Misconceptions
Although a thesis statement is typically at the end of the first paragraph of the essay
introduction, it can be presented in the opening sentences of your essay or it may need
one or more paragraphs of introduction. In addition, although some thesis statements
may be presented in a single sentence, others may need two or more sentences to state
your position. More important than length or position is that it is easily identifiable
and clearly states your position.
While it's always great to have three or more points to support your argument, if you
can do it in two... well, less is more sometimes. Just be sure that whatever evidence
you present, relates directly to your thesis statement and clearly supports your
conclusion.
A thesis statement can frustrate many writers because they believe the thesis must be
definitive before the paper is written. However, more often than not you'll find that as
you write the arguments that support your position, your thesis will evolve. In some
cases, you may find that in writing the arguments, your position will be completely
reversed! Pat yourself on the back for being so persuasive and redefine your thesis
statement to express your new position! Use a thesis statement to organize your essay
for yourself and your readers. Let it be the guide that focuses your thoughts,
introduces your argument and your evidence and helps prove your case beyond a
reasonable doubt!
Essay Outline
Have you ever told a joke and just before coming to the punch line,
remembered the part in the middle that makes the punch line
funny? Using an essay outline helps you organize your thoughts so
that you don't make that mistake. In addition, you'll find the more
structured your outline is, the better organized and easier to write
your essay will be. A well-structured essay outline helps you travel
from point to point in your composition, creating a natural flow for
the reader until you bring the "punch line" home in the summary or
conclusion.
Begin your outline by deciding whether to use the more traditional I, II, III, and IV
outline markers, use headings w/o any markers or a combination of both. The title
should be at the top of your paper and everything else will fall below it.
I. The Introduction - why you chose this topic or your premise /thesis and/or the
conclusion you hope to prove in the body (A). Enter the points you will cover (B).
Essay Outline Layout
Title (Centered or left-aligned)
I. Introduction
A. Premise/Thesis
B. Statement of points
II. Body
A. Point 1
1. Supporting Information
2. Supporting Information
B. Point 2
Supporting Information
Supporting Information
III. Conclusion/Summary
A. Summary of supporting
information
B. Conclusion reached
(Restatement of premise)
IV. Citations
in the blanks.
An essay outline can even help you determine the length of each paragraph.
Especially in cases where you are limited to a number of pages or assigned a word
count, you can use an essay outline to break the structure into percentages or words.
Writing an essay outline can be as easy as you want to make it. Using an essay outline
helps you organize your thoughts from beginning to end and makes sure you don't
leave any important parts out of the middle!
Essay Format
Frequently, the formatting of your essay may be nearly as important to a teacher as the
content is. If your teacher or professor gives you specific formatting guidelines, you
should follow them. However, if no guidelines are set, you have several different
options for formatting your paper.
The Essay Title
Although the topic of your essay serves as the title, the title section of your essay
contains several additional elements. You have two options for the title section:
1. Display the title at the top of the first page.
2. Use a separate title page for the title section of your essay.
When you're not using a title page, generally your name, the course name, professor
or teacher's name and the due date are placed at the upper left hand corner of the first
page. Below that should be your title centered. Your essay begins after skipping one
line below the title.
Example:
John Brown
English Literature
Professor William Lear
December 5, 2005
When using a separate title page, the title is the first information on the page and
horizontally centered at about the top third of the page. Other title elements (your
name, the course name, teacher's name and the due date...) may be double or singlespaced and may be either centered or left aligned in the final third of your title page.
Title Page Layout
English Literature
Professor William Lear
December 5, 2005
Note: The essay title should be in the same font type and size as the rest of your essay
and should not be bolded, italicized or underlined.
Tips for Formatting Essay Text
1. Use the standard margins of 1" on the top and bottom margins and 1.25" on the
left and right margins.
2. Double spaced text is standard in essay writing and provides room for your
editor or teacher to circle or underline errors or add arrows connecting their
comments to your text.
3. Unless otherwise specified, essay text is left aligned. In cases where your essay
is hand written instead of typed, it's "handy" to use a straight edge to keep
vertical alignments at a 90-degree angle.
4. Use a standard font such as "Times New Roman" size 12.
5. Print your essay on only one side of paper.
6. Use standard white paper (8.5" X 11").
7. Paragraphs are identified by an indentation of five spaces (a tab), do not make
extra spaces between paragraphs.
Page Numbers
When used, a separate title page is not numbered. The first page of text is page 1 and
may be numbered at the bottom center, in the upper right hand corner, or left
unnumbered. Number subsequent pages in the upper right hand corner of each page.
Page numbers should be numbers only. Abbreviations like "p. 3" or indicators like
"page 2 of 5" are usually inappropriate for essays.
In the MLA style, the page number is preceded by your last name spaces, i.e. Brown
1. Also in the MLA style all pages that contain the essay text are numbered in the
upper right hand corner.
Works Cited
If you have used outside sources to gain information on your essay, you need to
include a works cited page of the sources you used at the end of your paper. The
appropriate method of listing your sources depends on the type of publications (e.g.
book, article, web page, etc.) you used in researching your topic. The format of the
works cited page also varies according to the style of citation used within your text.
misuse of words like using then instead of than, cant instead of can't, or
transposed letters such as form instead of from.
Be sure proper nouns are capitalized, abbreviations are correct and end with
periods in the proper places (e. g. U.S., MN, Inc.)
Check for punctuation mistakes such as an orphaned parenthesis, extra spaces
between words, and inconsistencies in using commas.
Read through your essay again to be sure your thoughts are clearly stated. Try
reading it aloud or let someone else read it to you.
Are citations clear and correct? Have your correctly listed all sources you used?
After you have proofread and made the necessary changes to your essay, leave it for at
least one-half hour and then read it again. Errors you missed the first time through will
frequently catch your attention! Another good final check is to print your essay as a
draft. Draft outputs print with minimal formatting and make small errors much easier
to spot.
Serif fonts (those with the little legs on the letters) make printed material much easier
to read. If you typed your essay on a computer using a sans-serif font (one with no
little legs on the letters), change it to a serif font before you print it. Print a copy of
your essay and read it again, checking the size and readability of the text.
Once you're satisfied with your printed copy, you're finished! Good job! It's time to
hand in your essay!
Essay Citations
In-Text Citations
Use in-text essay citations when you:
1. Add a direct quote to your essay.
2. Paraphrase an idea from a source.
3. Summarize information from a single source.
Several citation systems exist, but one of the most commonly used is the author-page
system. The MLA (Modern Language Association) is the recognized standard for the
author-page system of citation and is used widely in the humanities. MLA citations
include the author's surname and page number in parenthesis. If you reference the
author's name in the text of your essay, it's necessary to include only the page number.
EX: In picture books, such as coffee table photography books, the author
usually pays for the photographs or permissions to use them. (Bykofsky and
Sander, 141).
EX: According to Bykofsky and Sander, in books containing a majority of
photos, like coffee table picture books, the author purchases the photos. (141).
Notice, that when there are two authors, both of their surnames are mentioned. When
there are more than two authors, they are referenced as such: (Smith, Jones, et al,
179). Reference pages by number only. (i.e. p.179 is not be used)
The MLA system is an in-text method of citing sources and includes just enough
information to help your reader find the information in the works cited page.
Although a quote from an expert can add impact to your essay, in most cases you
should try to either paraphrase or summarize the information, using citation to
reference your source. However, when you do use direct quotations, follow these
rules:
1. Insert the quotation exactly as it was written, errors and all. Directly after a
spelling error in a quote insert the word [sic]. EX: "Directly after a spelling
errer [sic]... "
2. If you don't use the whole quotation, use an ellipses followed by trailing
quotation marks (..." ) to signify that it isn't the whole quotation.
3. If you make a change in the quotation, such as an underline or bold text in part
of the quotation, note it in parentheses after the quotation. EX: "Directly after a
spelling error [sic] (my underline).
4. Use parenthesis ( ) for information that you add after a quote and square
brackets [ ] for information you add within the quotation.
5. Cite your source. Usually, when you use a quotation, it's appropriate to cite the
author's name within the text. In that case, you need only to reference the page
number of the quotation.
Works Cited
The works cited section goes on a new page after the end of your essay. Put the text
"Works Cited" at the top center of the page. Generally the woks cited should include
the name of the author, the name of the article used (if applicable), the name of the
publication, the city of publication, and the year of publication of all the references
that you used to write your essay.
Hints
List your sources in alphabetical order based on the first word in each citation
(ignore words such as "the" and "a").
Double space your works cited page.
If the citation spans across multiple lines, indent all lines after the first line.
The following are formats of how to cite common sources (in MLA format).
Books
Author's Last Name, Author's First Name and Middle Name/Initial. Title of Book.
Place of Publication: Publishing Company Name, Year of Publishing.
Encyclopedias
Author's Last Name, Author's First Name and Middle Name/Initial. "Article
Name." Title of Encyclopedia. Year of Edition or Edition Number ed.
Magazines
Author's Last Name, Author's First Name and Middle Name/Initial. "Article
Name." Title of Magazine Day of Month (If applicable) Month Year: Page Number(s)
of article.
Websites
Author's Last Name, Author's First Name and Middle Name/Initial. "Title of
Article/Document." Title of Site. Ed. Name of Editor (First Name Last Name). Date of
publication or most recent update. Name of organization associated with site. Date of
when you accessed the document. <http://www.websiteaddress.com>
(If information is not available then leave that section out)
The Five-Paragraph Essay
2. Whatever your essay says, how it looks creates your reader's first impression.
Format your essay for easy reading, paying strict attention to unity in tab
spaces, indents, and proper margins.
3. Knowing the different types of essays helps not only in the essay writing
process, but can also help you choose a topic.
4. Keep a dictionary handy or put an online dictionary in your Internet Favorites.
Your spell checker won't know the difference between words like complement
(number) and compliment (praise). If you aren't sure of the spelling of a word
and don't have access to a dictionary (for instance while taking a college boards
test), replace it with a different word.
5. Use an outline whenever possible.
6. Create your works cited page as you write/research your essay. In addition to
reminding you where to find relevant information, adding citations as you use
them prevents forgetting one in your list.
7. Don't over-quote. Consider paraphrasing before using direct quotations. Yet,
remember to cite your source even when paraphrasing another person's thought.
8. Transitions create a bridge from one paragraph to the next. In addition,
effective use of transitions adds continuity to your writing and cohesion to your
essay as a whole.
9. Always type your essay on a computer (unless otherwise instructed) and make
backup copies of your essay, just in case.
10.Thesis statements benefit your readers by creating a roadmap that guides them
through your essay. Creating a strong thesis statement and identifying
supporting points helps you stay on topic as you write.
11. Know your subject. Collect two to three times more information than you
intend to use. Researching a variety of sources also helps ensure that facts are
accurately represented.
12.Don't' overlook primary resources. If you're writing about Hamlet, read the play
and form your own opinions. If you're writing about Mel Gibson's Hamlet, read
the play, watch the movie and form your own opinions.
13.Be assertive in your essay, avoid using lines such as, "I think..." or "In my
opinion...".
14.Print a copy of your essay and read it aloud to find hidden errors and weak
areas that need editing. As you read, ask yourself what opinions your reader
might form as they read. Better yet, have a friend read your printed essay back
to you.
15.Proofread, revise and edit your essay before you submit your final copy.
Read the directions carefully. Pay attention to last minute verbal instructions, listening
especially for changes to written directions. Ask questions if you need to clarify
directions. Example: A key instruction might be that you only have to answer three
out of five essay questions. Find out if answering the final two is worth extra credit or
no credit.
Essay Test Taking Strategies
Review the whole test before you begin writing.
You may find partial answers to some questions hidden in others.
Find which questions will be easy and which will be more difficult.
Some questions may be worth more points than others may.
As you review the test, jot down any ideas that come to mind.
Budget your time equally for each question. Include time to review and finish difficult
questions, make corrections or changes, and time to proofread your essay(s),
Try to write as neatly as possible.
Each question will have a central idea. Try to answer the questions from the
instructor's point of view, remembering what was most emphasized during class.
Look for directional terms found in keywords such as:
Analyze: Examine and clarify an idea.
Compare: Identify similarities and differences, pros and cons.
Evaluate: Come to a conclusion based on facts.
Outline: Describe the main points of a topic. If you're unsure, ask if this
keyword means to use an outline format (i.e. I, II, III,) or an essay format
(descriptions in the body paragraphs).
Define: Explain the exact meaning and support your definition with facts.
Describe: Go into detail. Use examples, verbal illustrations, and lists to connect
ideas.
Summarize: Give a short account of the topic, still using the essay format but
sticking to facts and excluding unnecessary details. Circle any directional terms
you find in each question to be sure your essay stays on course.
Begin with the easiest question and move on to the more difficult ones.
Make a simple outline of ideas for each essay question.
Remember the essay format is with the three "tells":
Tell them what you're going to tell them (introduction): Use the introduction to
repeat the question in your own words to let your teacher see both your
understanding of the question and a short description of your answer.
Tell them (body):
o Answer the question in detail, using your outline for your main points
and adding the details to each point.
o Numbers or bullets make for easier reading and let your teacher easily
find each point.
o If you aren't sure about an exact date or number, use approximations that
you are sure of such as "the early 21srt century" or "over a dozen".
Tell them what you told them (conclusion): Don't overlook the conclusion to
your essay. A strong conclusion can provide extra clarity to your essay by
restating your point of view and defining how you reached it by summarizing
your major points.
Proofread your essay. Even if they don't add points, correct spelling, grammar, and
punctuation makes reading easier and keeps your teacher focused on your essay
instead of mechanical mistakes.
After Test Strategies
Every test is good practice for the next test! Analyze your test, paying equal attention
to your strong points and weak points. Build on your strengths and work to make
weak areas stronger.
If your score was low, ask your teacher what you could have done to improve it.
Although essay test taking strategies are important, learning some general test taking
strategies for before, during, and after essay test taking is also valuable to getting good
essay test grades.
Why I Chose Cable Internet Over Fios Internet - This is also unacceptable since
use of first person makes it subjective rather than objective and suggests
personal choice rather than factual evidence.
Reasons Why Cable Internet Rules Over Fios Internet - This is acceptable. It
defines the topic, objectively states your position, and relates that your
argument is based on evidence (reasons).
Introducing the Persuasive Essay
Use your thesis in your persuasive essay introduction. In addition to putting your topic
and position into a sentence, the introduction to your persuasive essay should be a
clear definition of the points that support your thesis. Present them in the same order
that you'll use in the body of your essay to help the reader see that your position is
supported in a way that comes to a logical conclusion.
Organizing the Persuasive Essay Body
The easiest way to organize the body of a persuasive essay is to think of your points as
pointing towards your conclusion. Each sentence in the body should be closely related
to your topic and to the sentence that precedes it.
Begin each paragraph with a point from your introduction, following the same
sequence you presented in the introduction. Support it with your evidence. As
you finish each paragraph, examine it as you did the opposing point of view.
Look for mistakes, inconsistencies in logic, and truths masquerading as facts.
Be sure your evidence is specific. Stay away from using broad generalizations
and personal opinions. Especially refrain from using words like all (as in all
people), always, every, and never.
Check to see that you have accurately cited any sources you used in examples
and quotations.
Help your reader see the logical progression of your argument by concluding
each paragraph with a transitional sentence that leads to your next point.
Before you begin writing your conclusion, check all paragraphs of your essay body to
ensure that
1. Your evidence is strong and relevant to the point you addressed in the
paragraph
of the essay and include a list of sources at the end of the paper. The critical
essay normally uses the MLA format of citation.
2. Remember to proofread your essay. Mechanical errors (spelling, grammar,
punctuation) erase your credibility as an expert on your topic.
Although finding the supporting evidence for a critical essay takes some effort,
because you support your position with facts the critical essay results in making you
look like an expert on your topic. Overall, it may be easier to write than a first-person
essay!
How to Write a Narrative Essay
About
The narrative essay offers the writer to do what many of us like to
do best talk about him or her self! Each of us has experiences that
we enjoy sharing with others and the narrative gives us the tools to
communicate our story in a way that is easily understood by others.
The narrative essay is usually a story about your own life. You may
tell about a memorable person or event from the past or the
present. Some narrative essays also tell a family tale about a
parent, grandparent, other relative or close friend.
Writing
Although usually you want to refrain from beginning a composition
with I, in writing the first draft of your narrative essay, it may be
the easiest way to start your creativity flowing. Another rule in
writing the narrative essay is to put events in chronological order.
However, rules were made to be broken, and sometimes a tale isnt
best told moment by moment. Get the story on paper. Afterwards,
youll go back and put it into essay form.
As you write, remember that using descriptive language is an excellent tool to draw
the reader into your experience. Use vivid verbs and colorful adjectives and adverbs
that involve all five of the senses. Make your reader see, hear, feel, taste, and touch
your point of view.
Keep your writing conversational as if you were telling your tale instead of writing it.
Use anecdotes, metaphors, and tales within tales. In fact, write your story in the way
you would be most comfortable telling it. Once you have finished your first draft, you
can begin forming it into an essay.
Like most narrative tales, the narrative essay is usually told in the first person. Yet, if
your story is about what happened to a friend, a relative, or a pet, use he or she.
However, be consistent in your point of view. If you begin in the first person, stick to
it. If you begin in the third person, stick to that.
Most important about the narrative essay is that it is based on a real story. Second in
importance is that the narrative essay takes the shape of an essay and not just a story.
Introduce your narrative essay by introducing the topic and your characters. Also,
include your essays basic premise in your introduction. This doesnt have to be earth
shattering, but it should indicate that you learned something from the experience or at
least why your story is important to you.
Look at your draft and choose the points that not only best describe and enhance your
story but also are most related to your premise. As you develop your narrative essay,
use descriptive test that creates a dominant impression in support of each point and
your premise.
Like any essay, the final paragraph of your narrative essay is your conclusion. Repeat
your premise and summarize how the story led you to your conclusion. The
descriptive language and premise of a narrative essay makes your experience
interesting to your reader. Putting a story into a narrative essay form helps you relate
an important event in your life in a way that is easily understood by any reader.
3. Could you hear the crunch as you bit through the skin?
4. Could you taste the explosion of flavor?
Actually, there is more than one way to write a descriptive essay. Some descriptive
essays are written objectively, using only the facts:
Ex: The apple was fully ripe, a fact supported by its deep red color and the ease
with which its dry brown stem separated from the tree.
Tip: Keep your essay on topic by applying descriptive text to your subject only.
Notice above that no description is applied to the tree.
Other descriptive writing, like the first example, is subjective in that it intends to paint
a vivid picture that elicits sensations or arouses emotion in the reader. However, in
either form, descriptive writing adds strength to your essay by adding interesting and
specific details to your composition.
Although the first example is a descriptive paragraph, be sure to follow the standard
essay writing format of introduction, body, and conclusion when writing your
descriptive essay. Use your introduction to both present your subject and to tell your
reader why you found it interesting.
Choose your details carefully. In writing a descriptive essay, your objective is to leave
your reader with just one impression.
For instance, if the apple was grass green instead of rosy red, you might take some
poetic license and leave that fact out, selecting only the details that support your
description and convey the impression or a ripe and juicy apple.
When writing a descriptive essay, start building your description by brainstorming the
facts
Red Apple
Brown Stem
Small black blemish near the top
Thin skin
Juicy
Crunchy
Round
Heavy and solid
By the time you finish this process, youll probably have written an objective
description and only need to put it into sentences and insert them into appropriate
paragraphs of your descriptive essay. In writing a subjective description, youll want
to build on the facts by adding adjectives to some of them and using synonyms that
are more descriptive for others. (e.g. rosy red as opposed to red or weighty as opposed
to heavy).
Choose two or three of the descriptions youve built and use them as the focal points
of your descriptive essay body, with supporting information that describes why they
are important to your overall view. (In this example, the ripeness of the apple.)
Conclude your descriptive essay with a summary of your points and restate the
impression you meant to create.
How to Write a Reflective Essay
Look into a mirror. The first thing you probably see is yourself
looking back at you. Keep looking though and youll also see whats
behind you. Writing a reflective essay is similar to looking into a
mirror except that instead of seeing objects reflected in the room
behind you, you see reflections of a past experience. Reflective
essays are usually written at the completion of a milestone. For
instance, a scientist may write a reflective essay at the completion
of an experiment or a student may be asked to write a reflective
essay at the end of a course of study or the completion of an
individual or class project.
An essay on My Summer Vacation could be a reflective essay.
However, a reflective essay is not to be confused with an
informative essay. While an informative essay relates facts like
where you went, what you did, and how much things cost, a
reflective essay is an evaluation. Its a record of your feelings and
findings from the beginning of your experience until the end. In
addition to concluding with a summary of your subject, the
conclusion to a reflective essay usually also includes what you
learned from the experience.
The essay format of introduction, body, and conclusion is at its strongest when used to
write a reflective essay. Begin writing your essay by describing your subject, your
feelings and/or expectations at the beginning of the project and by partly disclosing or
hinting at your conclusion.
Ex: I didnt want to go to South Dakota last summer, but by
the end of our summer vacation I learned that the Black Hills
are really more green than black and the Badlands really arent
so bad at all.
Your essay body would go on to describe your Black Hills vacation,
examining not just the points of interest but also why you found
them interesting. This particular essay might conclude with the trip's
highlights and the reasons you came away feeling that, the
Badlands really arent so bad at all.
In most reflective essays, as well as describing what went right, youll also want to
describe what went wrong or what could be improved and how. For instance, in the
example you might describe attractions you didnt visit that you would like to see
and/or side trips that disappointed you and why. Alternatively, you might describe
things you packed that you didnt need and things you didnt pack that you wished
you had brought with you.
The most important factor to remember in writing a reflective essay is that your
opinions and conclusions should directly relate to the experiences you examine in the
essay body.
How to Write an Argumentative Essay
II. Body
A. First point and supporting info
B. Second point and supporting info
C. Third point and supporting info
III. Conclusion
III Conclusion
Similarities
Differences
Sauce
Use your essay introduction to introduce both subjects and present the points you
intend to make.
Ex: However, although apples and oranges are both fruits, they are each ripe
with differences, some of which are shown in the way they are grown and
processed.
Format the body of your compare and contrast essay in one of several ways:
1. You can compare and contrast different elements of each subject in each
paragraph of your essay body. This is also called point by point comparison
and contrast.
Example 1:
1. (Compare) Apples and oranges are both tree fruits often grown
commercially in large orchards. (Contrast) However, apples grow in
every climate and oranges need tropical temperatures to produce fruit.
2. (compare) Although both fruits can be juiced, (contrast) apples are
pressed and only the juice is bottled while both pulp and juice is
squeezed from oranges.
3. (Compare) Again, while fruit sauce is made from both apples and
oranges, usually applesauce comes from the pared and pureed apple
(contrast) while orange sauce may contain both the rind and the pulp of
the orange.
2. You can use one paragraph to discuss one subject, the second paragraph to
discuss the other and the final paragraph of the body to compare and contrast
the two subjects.
Example 2:
1. Apples are a tree fruit that is often grown commercially in large
orchards. As well as eaten from the tree, apples are also both pressed into
apple juice or pureed and processed into applesauce.
2. Oranges are also a tree fruit, often grown commercially in large
orchards. Like apples, they can be eaten from the tree, squeezed into
juices or processed into orange sauce.
3. (Compare and contrast points discussed in paragraphs one and two.) One
big difference between apples and oranges is the way they are processed.
Notice that while apples are pressed for juice, orange juice is squeezed
from the orange. Another difference is that while apple juice contains
only the liquid pressed from the apple, orange juice may also contain the
pulp from the orange. Although applesauce contains the pureed pulp of
the pared apple, orange sauce may contain bits of orange rind as well as
the pulp of the fruit.
3. You can also limit your essay to discuss only one similarity and one difference
between the two subjects.
4. You can structure you essay to compare only similarities or to contrast only
differences between your two subjects.
Note: To avoid confusing your reader, its best to follow the same order of
representation in each paragraph. For instance, in example one notice that the order is
subject one (apples,) comparison, and then contrast and followed by subject two
(oranges,) comparison, and then contrast.
You may want to try a couple of different formats for your topic in order to choose
which best suits your subject. In addition, using appropriate transitions between
paragraphs is very important in writing the compare and contrast essay. Transitions
help your essay flow smoothly from point to point yet keep your essay on topic.
Cue Words
Another technique in writing the compare and contrast essay is to use cue words that
links one paragraph to the next.cue words. Cue words are clues to whether you are
comparing your subjects or contrasting them and make it easier for your reader to
understand your points.
Cue Words
Similarities
Is similar to
Both
Also
Too
As well
Like
Differences
On the other
hand
However
But
Although
Unlike
While
Like in any essay, finish your essay by summarizing the points you made in the body.
Ex: Although each is a commercially grown tree fruit, growing temperatures
and differences in processing apples and oranges clearly makes a distinction
between the two fruits.
Appropriate use of transitions and cue words help make your essay conclusion easy to
summarize. Writing a contrast and compare and essay is as easy as comparing apples
and oranges!
reader to the focus of your cause and effect essay by using the words cause and/or
effect in your essay thesis. Along with the thesis, your essay introduction should also
state the major points your essay will discuss.
The purpose of the cause and effect essay may be either to analyze or inform.
Generally, the cause and effect essay is organized either chronologically or in order of
importance. Keep causes and effects clearly defined by using keywords for causes
such as because of, due to, since, and leads to. For effects use words like
consequently, as a result of, thus, resulting in, and, therefore.
Support each point with evidence that clearly shows its relation to your topic. In cases
where your facts dont clearly support your argument, qualify your statements with
phrases like, the evidence suggests, it seems likely, or the apparent cause and
words like possibly, probably,perhaps, and maybe.
Disclose an unanswered question that led you to choose the topic. The question
may also be the basis for your essay thesis.
The Thesis: While your thesis should appear as early as you can fit it into your
research essay, it may be placed either in the introduction or in the first paragraph of
the body, depending on the subject and depth of the information your essay explores.
The thesis should be clear and concise. A rule of thumb says that if your thesis extends
beyond a single sentence, you may need to redefine your argument. As usual, the
supporting points of your thesis directly follow it.
Argument and Documentation: The meat of your research essay, the argument and
documentation section presents your case. How you develop your points depends on
whether your essay format is expository or argumentative.
The Historiography: The historiography is an overview of other works written on the
same topic, those that share your point of view as well those opposing your argument.
Although often addressed only in footnotes or endnotes, you may place the
historiography within the body if it is important to the development of your essay. For
instance, you might use the historiography to acknowledge a contradicting position
and explain why its invalid or to introduce an expert source that agrees with your
viewpoint.
Discussion of Sources: Different from the usual list of cited sources, the research
essay takes time to discuss sources of information. The discussion of sources takes
into account the biases and weaknesses of your sources as well as their strengths and
the value they add to your argument. Furthermore, in a discussion of sources you may
also include sources that you didnt use and the reasons why you omitted them from
your paper.
Although the discussion of sources also is most often found in footnotes, its placement
depends upon its importance to your topic and to the development of your article.
Conclusion: Again, the conclusion of a research essay differs from the standard essay
format. Although youll redefine your thesis and summarize the supporting points,
you may choose to add some pertinent information. For instance, the conclusion of a
research essay is the only place in your paper where its appropriate to express your
personal opinion. Furthermore, you might add information that connects your topic to
a contemporary issue such as how it brought about some significant change. You may
also provide avenues for further research.
How to Write an Expository Essay
Each paragraph of the body of the expository essay must have a dominant point that
directly relates to the essay thesis. All supporting sentences within each body
paragraph must have a direct and factual relationship to the dominant point.
Appropriate use of transitions is also crucial to a good expository essay. Transitions
confirm the organization and the logic of your composition as they allow the reader to
move smoothly from point to point of your essay.
Keep sentence structures simple and clear in anticipation of potential
misunderstandings. Stay away from slang and colloquialisms. Be sure to use technical
terms in context and accurately. Explain acronyms and those terms that may be
unfamiliar to your reader.
Conclude your expository essay by restating your thesis and summarizing the points
that lead to your conclusion.
Concluding the Expository Essay
After youve finished your first draft, along with checking for mechanical errors,
check your essay to see if you have explained your topic thoroughly. Be sure that your
thesis relates to every paragraph and that supporting sentences directly relate to your
dominant points.
Reorganize your essay as needed to keep your logic clear and you information in an
appropriate sequence. The real conclusion of your expository essay is when your
composition is a well-ordered, easy-to-understand analysis of your topic.
College admissions boards read hundreds of essays each year, many that are almost
carbon copies of the next. Your essay will need to stand out from the crowd and
impress the admissions board with the unique individual that is you.
The most frequent criticism of college admissions essays is that the writer isnt
specific in answering the individual questions asked, especially in tailoring his/her
response to the school. You can find answers to the most frequently asked questions
by answering a few questions about yourself.
What is the most impressive characteristic of your personality?
What is the most distinctive element of your life story?
What about your life most influenced your choices and the goals you have set
for your future.
What influenced you to choose your field of interest? Why are you well suited
to the course of study you have chosen?
What are your real goals for the future? What milestones have you passed and
what milestones must you pass in order to achieve your goals?
Have you left anything out that might be relevant to your personal statement?
Keep thinking of questions to answer that relate to your course of study, your
goals, and the school(s) to which you are applying.
As you answer your questions, dont write descriptive paragraphs. Just write down the
information. Your answers are evidence that youll use in your responses to specific
questions.
Your College Admissions Essay Topic
Like any essay, the introduction of your college admissions essay should introduce
your topic and the main points that support your topic. Dont make the mistake of
thinking your topic is either an overview or a long-winded dissertation on your life.
The college admissions board wants to see what events in your life led you to an
interest in your course of study and what makes you believe that attending their school
will best help you achieve your goals. The first paragraph should be the framework
and set the scene for your entire college admissions essay.
Use each paragraph of the body to elaborate on a single point with statements that
both support the point and relate to the essay topic.
Abolish Homework
Butter Isn't Better (Than Margarine)
Social Security - R.I.P.
Tap Water As Good as Bottled Water
Exercise: Walk - Don't Run
One World - One Currency: The Euro
Fit Insurance to the Vehicle, Not to the Driver
My Diary My Property
Stay Out of My Room
Progressive Taxation is an Unfair System
People Should Eat Healthy Foods
Boys Better than Girls
My First Computer
Buying My First Car
Christmas at Our House
My Favorite Holiday
My (Pet) (Name)