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INT. DETECTIVES OFFICE - NIGHT

Credit sequence commences. Were introduced to a shot of a


briefcase with the night-life of New York illuminating it
through half shut blinds. The static shot of the briefcase
will show it being filled up with money until full then
being shut and locked. Mr. Hancock reaches out to grab his
smoke. When all of a sudden he turns around as someone
emerges from the corridor.
NICOLETTE
(V.O.)
I was so scared...I just needed
help. I didnt know where else to
go. I thought he could help me. I
didnt want it to end like it did,
but its not my fault. I asked him
nicely and lady like but how my
daddy always said, wont wont get
any where with princess like
attitude. I shouldnt have left the
fast white lady with him...I really
shouldnt have.
(Takes drag of a smoke,
breathes out slowly)
Behind the voice over well have a close up of woman in the
door way standing with the briefcase. As she runs in
and approaches Mr. Hancock she chucks the briefcase on the
desk next to his. After she sees the she is getting no one
she throws a tantrum and grabs the wrong briefcase. A close
up revels a mark she has on her hand.
NICOLETTE
(V.O.)
He shouldnt have turned me down,
it never ends well for whom does.
He should have listened to me.
(Takes drag of a smoke,
breathes out slowly)
Behind the voice-over the detective will take a deep breath,
and shake off the burden left. As he turns around he notices
the wrong briefcase and he attempts to open it when all of a
sudden he gets shot.
NICOLETTE
(V.O.)I heard a shot which I most
afraid of. It was my fault, I cant
stay otherwise I will follow his
fate

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