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Writing Sophisticated Simple Sentence

To avoid boring simple


Examples of simple sentences include the following:

sentence, try the


following tricks.

1. Joe waited for the train.


"Joe" = subject, "waited" = verb

Sophisticated:
Good:
Joe, who is my classmate and best friend, waited for the train.
Panpahusay o panpahalaba la ini hiya. Imu la gindescribe hi Joe. Bisan ini tanggalon, asya la gihap it
meaning hit sentence.

Good:

Joe waited for the brand new train at the old station for one hour.
Panpahusay o panpahalaba la ini gihap hiya. Imu la
gin-describe an train. Bisan ini tanggalon, asya la
gihap it meaning hit sentence.

Excellent:

Joe, who is my classmate and best friend, waited for the brand new train
at the old station for one hour.

2. The train was late.


"The train" = subject, "was" = verb
Sophisticated: The very old and slow train coming from Manila was late for nearly two hours.
3. I looked for Mary and Samantha at the bus station.
"I" = subject, "looked" = verb
Sophisticated: I looked for Mary and Samantha, who are both nursing students from London, at
the bus station in
Tacloban City.
4. Mary and Samantha took the bus.
"Mary and Samantha" = compound subject, "took" = verb
Sophisticated: Mary, who is a nurse from London, and Samantha, a nurse from America, took the
Tacloban City tourist
bus to visit the Provincial Hospital in the town of Palo.
5. Mary and Samantha arrived at the bus station early but waited until noon for the bus.
"Mary and Samantha" = compound subject, "arrived" and "waited" = compound verb
Sophisticated: Mary and Samantha, who are both nurses from London and America, arrived at
the Tacloban City new
bus station early with all their bags of medical supplies
and equipment but waited until noon for the bus
to pick them up to their hotel
in the town of Palo.
TIP: Pag-ayad anay hin simple sentence na simple la, tapos kitaa kon mayda kaba han THREE
ELEMENTS (subject, verb, & complete thought). Kon mayda, poydi mon a i-describe it mga tawo,
lugar, o gamit para humalaba tim sentence.

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