You are on page 1of 3

GENERAL MISTAKES & RECOMMENDATIONS

I.

Punctuation & Grammatical Errors

Page: Print; First Paragraph;


used in place of The

Grammatical error; They

Page: Print; Design & Production; Punctuation error; Full


Stop(.) used before and

II.

Page: Software; Systems Simplified; Comma(,) used before


and

Recommendations
Portfolio: Our Handiwork

Classifications include only Print & Digital solutions delivered.


Kindly incorporate other aspects that have been successfully
delivered: Namely: Angel Brooking Application.

It would be fabulous to see our solutions further microclassified in the portfolio page as we have done for our main
page and classifications.

Strategically important clients like HDFC and other big


corporate names could be moved up the order, as per the
significance and relevance of the solution provided, on our
portfolio list.

Domain Mukutposhak is dismantled, kindly reconfirm and


if necessary make the required changes.

Regards,

Arun Raj S. Pillai

You might also like