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Week 3, Day 2
In-Class
Strong
2
Debate!
paragraphs
chunk paragraphs
Paragraph
revision
IN-CLASS DEBATE
The sublime:
A feeling where a piece
The sublime:
of writingGenerally
or naturenatural things- our
completely overwhelms
brains are more powerful,
you. but these things are
Answer by Frederic Brown
terrifying, displeasing, and
scary
a positive
1) Whatcreates
is the theme
of the story?
sensation
2) This
story afterwards
was first written in 1964.
How do you think that affects it?
3) To what extent does this story illustrate
the sublime?
The sublime:
Terror [is] the ruling
priniciple of the sublime. It
is a violent, emotional
reaction.
"The passion caused by the great and sublime in nature . . . is Astonishment; and astonishment is
that state of the soul, in which all its motions are suspended, with some degree of horror. In this
case the mind is so entirely filled with its object, that it cannot entertain any other (Burke 58).
IN-CLASS DEBATE
What
What
things make
paragraphs stronger?
What
essay?
STRONG PARAGRAPHS
Strong paragraphs:
Have
1 core idea
Have
a topic sentence
Develop
Have
logical bridges
Include
Have
enough
evidence
analysis
What
Read
What could
it be?!
Try
In George Orwells Animal Farm, Boxer represents the working class of Russia.
First, Boxer works harder than all of the other animals, as Orwell writes, From
morning to night he was pushing and pulling, always at the spot where work was
hardest (40). Boxer believes in Animalism and is motivated to work harder for this
cause than even for Farmer Jones. Also, Boxers character reveals that Orwell
believed the common workers of Russia were also working harder than ever for
little reward. Secondly, Boxer is easily brainwashed by Napoleon and his
propaganda, insisting If Comrade Napoleon says it, it must be right (Orwell 91).
Because Boxer is less intelligent than other animals, Napoleon easily brainwashes
Boxer into submission even when Napoleon commits terrible injustices.
Consequently, Orwell suggests that the lower class Russian workers were also easily
manipulated by Joseph Stalin. In conclusion, Boxers character, through his
relentless work and gullibility, paints a picture of the much abused, hardworking,
and honest Russian working class.
BREAK IT DOWN!
In George Orwells Animal Farm, Boxer represents the working class of Russia.
First, Boxer works harder than all of the other animals, as Orwell writes, From
morning to night he was pushing and pulling, always at the spot where work was
hardest (40). Boxer believes in Animalism and is motivated to work harder for this
cause than even for Farmer Jones. Also, Boxers character reveals that Orwell
believed the common workers of Russia were also working harder than ever for
little reward. Secondly, Boxer is easily brainwashed by Napoleon and his
propaganda, insisting If Comrade Napoleon says it, it must be right (Orwell 91).
Because Boxer is less intelligent than other animals, Napoleon easily brainwashes
Boxer into submission even when Napoleon commits terrible injustices.
Consequently, Orwell suggests that the lower class Russian workers were also easily
manipulated by Joseph Stalin. In conclusion, Boxers character, through his
relentless work and gullibility, paints a picture of the much abused, hardworking,
and honest Russian working class.
BREAK IT DOWN!
2 CHUNK PARAGRAPHS
Q: What is a chunk?
A: A chunk is 1 concrete
detail and 2 sentences of
commentary. The detail can
be a fact or quote. The
commentary explains why
the detail is important and
how it ties in to your essays
overall idea.
BLACK BART
BARTHOLOMEW
Check
What
it?
sentences
Evidence
Analysis
Transitions
Concluding
sentences
HOMEWORK