Collected By Nam B3 | BD IELTS Club Minh téng hop mét sé truéng hop ban hgp ban cé thé paraphrase nhim achieve diém tét hon trong IELTS Writing Task 1. Mong tai ligu c4 ich cho eéc ban. 1. Tir vung vé nhém tuéi ‘One person: He is 10 years old. He is a 10-year-old. He is aged 10. More than one person: The children in the class are all 10 years old. It is a class of 10-year-olds It is a class 10-year-old children. The children in the class are all aged 10. Age groups with more than one person: The chart shows the hobbies of children (who are) between 10 and 12 years old, The chart shows the hobbies of 10- to 12-year-olds The chart shows the hobbies of 10- to 12-year-old children. The chart shows the hobbies of children (who are) aged 10 to 12. The chart shows the hobbies of children who fall into 10 to 12 age group Ngoai ra mét sé tir khéc nha Children = youngsters = the young = young people The number of people in their forties (nhimg ngojai 6 dé tudi 40, tite tir 40 — 49 tui) Teenagers (miéu ta d6 tudi teen, tite tir 11-19 tudi) ‘The elderly = elderly people = senior citizens Adult (ngoqdi tin) 2. Gidi tinh - Male va female vira la danh tir dém dojge vita 1a tinh tir, va né dojge ding cho ngoyisi & bat ctr 46 tudi nao Eg: The number of males aged under 14 years old was 100 The number of male children aged under 14 years old was 100 - Men va women chi ding cho ngoyai lén. Tite khi dé bai ngoydi dojsi 18 tudi thi khong nén ding tir nay dé thay thé \5i di toygng la children hode 1a Page 1/8Collected By Nam D3 | BD IELTS Club - Boys va girls chi nén doyge ding cho tré em 3. Luong chi tiéu hang tudn ~ Average weekly spending ~ spent on average - average expenditure - weekly spending figures - levels of spending spent per week - expenditure per week 4, Tir vung vé tén nude va ngurdi nude dé Tén nude Nguoi 6 née dé Canada Canadians England The English/ English people Turkey The Turkish/ Turkish people Spain The Spanish/ Spanish people The USA Americans Germany Germans Ttaly Italians ‘Sweden The Swedish/Swedish people Mexico Mexicans Japan Japaneses Ireland The Irish/ Irish people Trong phan dé bai, néu cau héi khéng ligt ké tén noéc (e.g. "in three countries"), ban cé hai cach dé viét lai trong introduction cia minh nho sau. - "in Britain, France and Germany" - "in three countries, namely Britain, France and Germany". Page 2|8Collected By Nam Bd | BD IELTS Club Khéng quén ding “the” troyée 1 sé nojée nhoy "the USA", "the UK" va the “US” Céc edu trite edu 06 thé ding vs tén neyse The number of elderly people in the USA rose. The number of Americans aged 65 and over rose over the period shown, Canada also saw a rise in the number of elderly people. However, the figure for Australia fell. 5, Ngudi ding Internet The percentage of people who used the Internet The percentage of people using the Internet The percentage of people who had access to the Internet Internet usage The percentage of Internet users Bg: The proportion of people using the Internet in the USA was about 20%, - The proportion of Internet users in the USA was about 20%. 6. Ty I¢ that nghiép The proportion of people who were unemployed The proportion of people who were jobless Levels of unemployment Unemployment rate The proportion of people without job Level of joblessness E ~ The number of 16 -to 24-year-olds who were unemployed in England was around 18% in 2000 - Level of unemployment in England fell to only 10% in 2002 - Unemployment rate in England was higher than the figure for Mexico - The proportion of English 16 -to 24-year-olds without job was around 18% in 2000 - Level of joblessness in England fell to only 10% in 2002 - The proportion of people who were jobless in England fell to only 10% in2002 7. TY 16 ngudsi nghéo Poverty rate Level of poverty Page 3|8Collected By Nam Bd | BD IELTS Club The percentage of people who live in poverty The percentage of people who live under the poverty line Poverty level Be poor Eg: - Poverty rate in Vietnam was much higher than that of Canada, at 10% and 2% respectively. Phe percentage of people who live in poverty in Vietnam was much higher than that of Canada, at 10% and 2% respectively. - 10% of Vietnamese people were poor, compared with only 2% of Canadians. 8 Doanh thu bin hang Sales = turnover ~ Sales of fast food increased over the period shown - Tumover from fast food increased over the period shown - Fast food earned/obtained/gained just under $6billion 9, Hang nim, hang thang, hang tuan. Per person = per capita = an average of = average + Noun Annual = yearly = per year Per week = weekly = each week = a week Eg: ~ Average yearly spending on landlines dropped by nearly $200 - Consumption of pizza dropped to 10 kilograms per person per year The per capita consumption of beef in the US rose from around 60 to a peak of 90 pounds - US beef consumption rose from around 60 to a peak of 90 pounds perperson - The amount of beef consumed by the average American rose from around 60 toa peak of 90 pounds 10.Chi tigu Danh ti: Spending Déng tir: be spent on = be allocated for = be used for = be expende: Danh tir chi ngojdi: Spender sxpenditure be paid out for Eg: ~In 2010, expenditure on mobile phones rose to around $750, ~In 2010, spending on mobile phones rose to around $750 ~In 2010, Swedish consumers spent around $750 on mobile phones Page 4|8Collected By Nam Bd | BD IELTS Club ~In 2010, around $750 was allocated for mobile phones by Swedish consumers - Swedish people were the largest spenders on mobile phones, witharound. $750 expended on this, ~ Sweden had the highest percentage of expenditure for mobile phones 11.Phuong tign giao thong Céc tir va cum tir paraphrase sé long ngojdi ding xe 6 t6, chung ta sir dung tojong te v6i nhiéu phowong tign khdc nho bus, train... The number of people who use cars The number of people driving to work The number of car commuters The number of people who commute by car The number of people who travel by car The number of car users Eg: ~ Approximately 5 million was the number of bus users in 2010, ~ Around 5 million commuters traveled by bus in 2010 - The bus was used by about 5 million people in 2010 Néu di bing xe dap: The number of people who cycle to work = the number of cycling commuters Néu di bing tau héa: The number of rail passengers 12.Su san xuat va tiéu thy ~Tigu thy (Noun) Consumption (Verb): be used, be consumed, be drunk or be eaten - San xuat: (Noun): production, manufacture (Verb): be produced, be made, be manufactured, 13, 3 notes quan trong nhat = Don't forget to write a good summary/overview of the information, A quick one- conclusion is not good enough. I prefer to put the overview straight after the introduction, and I try to write 2 sentences describing the information in general. You won't get a high score if you don't write a good overview. =Don't describe items separately (c.g. 2 lines on a graph). You should always try to Page 5|8 entenceESOL he neh Collected By Nam Bd | BD IELTS Club compare things if it is possible to do so. Instead of describing 2 lines separately, compare the 2 lines at key points Dont try to deseribe every number on a chart or graph (unless there are only a few numbers). A key skill in task 1 is being able to choose the key information and describe or compare it well. [usually mention around 6 or 7 numbers in my main paragraphs. Page 6|8