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Writing Task 2 ngy 30/07/2016

WRITING TASK 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
TOPIC: Some people say that the gap between poor and rich is becoming wider. The rich
is growing richer and the poor is growing poorer. What problems does this situation
cause and measures need to be taken to address it?
Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
Write at least 250 words.

Bi hng dn
I. B cc
Da vo cu hi, chng ta c th thy y l dng Effect & Solution. Nh vy v b cc bi,
chng ta s bao gm 4 on nh sau:

Para 1: Introduction: paraphrase the Topic

Para 2: Effects of the issue cc vn do hin tng bi cp
Para 3: Gii quyt cho cc vn mnh nu
Para 4: Conclusion: rephrase the introduction - lp li m bi

II. Parapraph 1 - Introduction

Vi bi ny, chng ta ch cn paraphrase li cu hi l c. y l 1 bc quen thuc nn
mnh lm nhanh nh:
Mt s t chng ta c th paraphrase nh sau

Gap = disparity
Is becoming wider = greater

It is believed that the disparity between rich and poor is greater, which leads to several serious
consequences. Therefore, some actions should be considered to deal with this issue.

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III. Paragraph 2 Effect

y l 1 bi kh v n c th dn n cc ideas tng i v m. Mnh th ngh chng ta c ngh
n gin l c.
Brainstorm: khi ngh n khong cch giu ngho gia tng, ngha l ngi ngho ngy cng
ngho, th chng ta c th ngh ngay n cc vn thng gp: education, crime rate,
healthcare, happiness. Mnh s chn 2 ci d ni nht trong :

Education: Ngi ngho thng gp vn v gio dc g? thng gp kh khn vi

vic i hc v khng c tin tr hc ph, hay tr em phi ngh hc i lm. Vy vic ny
s dn n h qu g? vic khng c i hc y s lm khong cch giu ngho
cng tng
Crime rate: Ngi ngho cng s gp kh khn khi kim sng? Mt s ngi tng
thiu s lm liu (commit crime) dn n t l ti phm cao

Tm ti, tng cho on effect s nh sau:

Could not afford tuition fees and let children drop out of schools to work the gap between
the poor and the rich widen
Unable to cover living cost commit crime to pay bills/ meet basic needs crime rates
increase

III. Paragraph 3 Solution

Mt khi chng ta c vn , th gii php thng tng i d dng v c thiu ci g chng
ta s p ng ci .

Education: tr em khng c i hc v khng c tin chnh ph cung cp gio dc

min ph, hoc cp hc bng cho hc sinh ngho. iu ny s dn ti iu dn ti iu
g? Tr em c i hc, th th h ny chc chn s tt hn do kin thc tt, v kim
c vic lm v thu nhp dn ti thu hp khong cch giu ngho.
Crime: ngi ta phm lut l v ngi ta khng c tin nui sng bn thn vy chnh
ph cn lm g? CP ch cn to vic lm c l t l ti phm s gim

Tm li, on 3 s nh sau:

The government could provide education ensure better generations with higer income
narrow the gap
The government could create jobs reduce crime rate

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FINAL SAMPLE Band 8.5+

Sau cng, chng ta c bi vit Band 8.5+ nh sau, cc bn lu nhng t in m l nhng t
rt tt:
It is believed that the disparity between rich and poor is becoming enormous, which leads to
several serious consequences. Therefore, some actions should be considered to deal with this
issue.
As the wealth distribution is increasingly unequal between people, several problems might
happen. Firstly, when the needys income is getting lower, it is hard for many individuals to have
access to education because they could not afford tuition fees, and some even tend to let their
children drop out of school to work. Thus, the gap between these two groups would be larger in
the future as a result of the educational inequality. In addition, when the poor have financial
difficulty, crime rates might be higher, from non-violent crimes like shoplifting to violent ones
like robbery. In other words, when impoverished people are unable to cover their living costs
fully, they would commit a crime to meet their basic needs.
It is clear that the government must take urgent steps to smitigate these problems. The first
remedy is that it should provide free education for children. When all children have free admission
to schools, we could ensure a better generation with higher average income in the future, thus
narrowing the gap. Moreover, the government also need to invest time and effort in job
creation. This means that when people can seek employment and have a stable income, they
would not break the law, which reduces the crime rates.
In conclusion, many issues are caused by the widening gap between rich and poor. It is possible
to think that it is high time for the government to take care of this concern.

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