Story Used Past Continuous Tense

It was a day last 23 September at 12 oclock am. I was going to Banten with my
friends in the class. When we gone to Banten, factually we were going at 2 oclock am
because we waited the lecture in the bus. Then, we arrived Krakatau Steel Industrial at 7
oclock am for just visited Industrial, when there, we were walked in the laboratory for know
method making a steel. When we were arraving in the villa, my friend go sick and she was
sleeping in the room.
We were going to the beach, and i was played banana boat with my friends.When i
was swimming, my friend played sand and i was joined in the game. In the evening, i was
cooking noodle and fried egg for a dinner. So, after we had dinner, we were playing a game
black and white about characteristic ours, we called this a game is makrab.
In the morning, we were going to the last industrial , the name industrial is Chemindo
Gemilang, chemindo is cement industrial. And in the place we were learning about profil this
industrial. We were going to bandung at 10 oclock am. We were arrived in the bandung at 9
pm,because while we arrived gate bandung the road is trafficjam.