a.

The boy and the barosaurus should both have their hands on their hips
and be bending/leaning to the side.

b. All of the dinosaurs should be bending with their hands on their hips.

d. remove the bronto's blue pants

e. widen the circle of logs. Add branches/limbs to the logs to make them
look like fallen trees.
f. change illustration style. Make the hadrosaurid look more cartoon/colorful
like the bronto/t-rex/stego
12
a. The hadrosaurid and triceratops look more realistic and are not the same
style of illustration as the other dinosaurs. The hadrosaurid and the
triceratops need to be more cartoonish.
b. The circle of logs needs to be widened. Put branches and limbs on the
logs to make them look like fallen trees.
c. The boy is in the circle dancing with a different dinosaur in each picture,
but the dinosaurs outside of the circle should be dancing too. All of the
dinosaurs should be hopping

c. Remove the bronto's blue pants

13
a. The hadrosaurid and triceratops look more realistic and are not the same
style of illustration as the other dinosaurs. The hadrosaurid and the
triceratops need to be more cartoonish.
b. The circle of logs needs to be widened. Put branches and limbs on the
logs to make them look like fallen trees.
c. The dinosaurs outside of the circle should be dancing too
d. Remove the bronto's blue pants
14
a. The hadrosaurid and triceratops look more realistic and are not the same
style of illustration as the other dinosaurs. The hadrosaurid and the
triceratops need to be more cartoonish.
b. The circle of logs needs to be widened. Put branches and limbs on the
logs to make them look like fallen trees.
c. All of the dinosaurs outside of the circle should be dancing too
d. Remove the bronto's blue pants
15 The Cover I cannot copy the cover exactly.

These are the instructions that I sent for

the cover, in the original attachment.
The cover should look just like the original except where the original has a skeletal trex, there should be the boy and a friendly t-rex twisting. The shading should be
like the original. The boy and the dinosaur should be blacked out. Instead of a red
background there should be a green background. The outline should still be yellow.

Yellow outline with a cartoon friendly looking dinosaur in the middle