OUTLINE OF ESSAY

Paragraph 1 (Introduction)
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Leading sentence: In Indonesia, healthcare is managed at the public or

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national level, provincial or regional levels, and at district levels

Summary of main points: " Indonesia's healthcare services include
government healthcare services, overseas aids, NGOs (non-profit health
organizations), and the private sector health system "

Paragraph 2 (First Supporting Point)

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Transition sentence: "On the other hand, in rural areas medical facilities are
limited, in urgent situation services are especially rare, and there is very
fewer numbers of doctors providing services there and same goes for

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medical or health-check facilities"

Supporting point: Introduction to health system
Evidence: Under decentralization process, the responsibility for health care
requirements is basically in the hands of district level governments.

Paragraph 3 (Second Supporting Point)

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Transition sentence: " In Indonesia, People can have health care facilities
that can be provided to them through both public and private health care

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system."
Supporting point: Devision in health
Evidence: People in Indonesia are more inclined towards private health
care and they suggested that the private sector is more efficient, wellorganized and quick in respond to patients requirements because of
competition with other private hospitals or clinics providing same services in
market as well .

Paragraph 4 (Third Supporting Point)

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Transition sentence: "The worth of public health care system in Indonesia is

not up to the mark; therefore people look forward to Europe or South
Americas health systems and want to get treatment from there with the aim

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to pay high price."

Supporting point: Cost of health care
Evidence: private health care in Indonesia is costly or expensive as
compare to public medical care.

Paragraph 5 (Conclusion)
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Transition sentence: " There were some reports highlighting health care
issues and failure of Indonesias Health care system that have an effect on

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millions."
Reiteration of main points: "Under decentralization process, the
responsibility for health care requirements is basically in the hands of district

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level governments."
Taking it one step further: " The present efforts made by the Indonesian
government in health service are not sufficient to meet the growing demand
of an increased number of population. so that the necessary improvement in
health care."