Peer Debriefer: Iqtidar ul Hassan Overall Comments: Daneshas description of her observation in a bar-cum-restaurant is lucid. All the observed participants have been described in detail. Denasha is a participant with the customers in the restaurant; her observation seems skipping the gist of the participatory dimension with the customers. Its non-participant aspects are more prominent. How as customers they feel and interact with the environment? Helpful Hints:
Danesha has described physical aspects of the location and of the people in detail. Meaning in the physical appearance of people and objects will be easy to read in
this detailed description.
Daneshas interaction with Chloe is more detailed. This is one aspect of the participation which demonstrate the nature of the situation observed through participation.
Suggestions:
A little elaboration of the participatory aspect with other customers in the