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Essay 1 draft

by Elissa Peipelman

FILE

216FA-ENGL-1301PHS2_53014397_EPEIPELMAN_ESSAY_1_DRAFT .DOCX (19.33K)

T IME SUBMIT T ED

28-SEP-2016 09:40AM

WORD COUNT

808

SUBMISSION ID

712284744

CHARACT ER COUNT

4081

Essay 1 draft
GRADEMARK REPORT
FINAL GRADE

GENERAL COMMENTS

/100

Instructor

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QM

Be Sure
Be sure to review the comma handout and sentence f elonies bef ore submitting f inal draf t.

Comment 1
synonym needed
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Comment 2
I think this sentence would be better closer to the evaluation portion of the paragraph

Comment 3
expensive
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