Essay 2

by Elissa Peipelman

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GRADEMARK REPORT
FINAL GRADE

GENERAL COMMENTS

/100

Instructor

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QM

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Be sure to perf orm a f inal originality check on your essay bef ore the deadline! Email me early if
you have questions.

Comment 1
United States

Comment 2
Some

Comment 3
vaccinations

Comment 4
this is all on one side. You need to represent the other side as well.

Comment 5
("Who 21").
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eliminate

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eliminate
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Comment 8
reword f or clarity

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eliminate
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Comment 10
eliminate
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Comment 11
Works Cited

Comment 12
entries should be in alphabetical order