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ENG 101-108
Zack DePiero
11/18/2016
WP2
Freedom of.. Wait.. What is Freedom Again?
America the land of the free and home of the scared ? AP US History has been put on the
chopping board in Oklahoma by state officials and patriots. Whom view it as a untrue and
fabricated version of American history that should not be taught to children because itll
change their outlook on the country they call home. But in opposition are academically
certified teachers and historians like Liana Heitin ( a special education teacher) and Randi
Weingarten ( historian and writer for nbc). Although they are of different professional positions
it is only natural for them to express and see things differently in their writing. Yet theyve seem
to come to a standstill in agreement on this topic. The class is simply an outline and review of
events that happened in our history in detail. Why is it a bad thing? Its the story of the forming
of our country and beliefs in exact detail. People tend to take small situations like these and blow
them way out of proportion even when it isn't necessary. AP US History does not hinder or alter
the views of a student instead it unravels and retells the truths and origins of our beloved country.
Why should we be afraid of what really happened in our past?
Randi Weingarten in his article Why we cant allow the GOP to whitewash AP US
History -even in his title- is confidently vocal about his views on the banning of AP US History.
And also on how it is mainly caucasian women and men who are protesting and concentrating
on such a small problem instead of focusing on problems like the Syrian Refugee Crisis or The
Black Lives Matter Movement or even The Standing Rock Protest. And his use of the word
whitewashing traps the reader in a sort of His vocabulary and way of organizing his words are
very formal and academic. He uses his own experiences and opinions within his writing. And
this gives the author credibility.
Yet he also finds reason to mention how this banning will and can affect students in
highschool who depend on this AP class for college credit. AP courses allow our students to
higher education out of reach for many, we can ill afford to close pathways to higher education.
This detail allows the reader to consider what exactly would happen if this banning would be
earn college credit while still in high school. At a time when rising tuition is driving the cost of
passed? One of his moves are his uses of historical mentions like Jim Crow South, The Great
Depression,Nazi Germany and Auschwitz in order to communicate the importance of these
historical events and what it means if we were to deny them. This move is extremely smart and is
made many times within his writing. At certain times it feels a little unnecessary to be very
repetitive almost like our reading from class Annoying Ways People Use Sources by Kyle D.
Stedman. Some of his examples and quotations are inserted into the text randomly; which to
evidence he provides us with is great. Its quite the Uncle Barry (Kyle D. Stedman, pg:247)
Separating quotes/statistics and using great transitions could help keep the attention of the reader.
Yet his message still stays intact. In shorter terms, AP US History should not be banned.
I was one of the 58 college teachers from across the country who participated in the
detailed focus-group discussions for the College Board in the fall of 2010. My feedback on the
new design was mixed,but generally positive with regards to the overarching goal Liana Heitin
a former teacher, just like uses experience in her writing consistently just like Weingarten but
unlike him she also looks at the opposing side's arguments. I think there's a fair amount of self-
righteous posturing among both the defenders and critics of the bill. I know almost nothing about
Reverend Fisher, and I am willing to believe that his motives are entirely honorable yet she
refutes I think his public pronouncements, if quoted accurately, have been less than balanced.
Shes very calm and kind rather than aggressive like Weingarten when debunking an argument.
And her use of statistics and polls really shows her logos. The use of vocabulary is very straight
to the point and casual especially when she speaks on her own views. It is the defiant opposite of
a more laid back informal group. Yet it still relays a very vocal message. And her moves like
introducing religious and political standpoints are constant in the writing. As a reader you don't
really get to see many people use preachers as a source and she did The new guidelines
emphasize what is bad about America the Baptist preacher said in a committee hearing. This
is a very interesting source that she has uses. But her sources don't stop there as she quotes
historians, teaches, politics and state legislators.
This AP test is something that sparks controversy whenever its mentioned. Both authors
have explained exactly why that happens in their own ways; As a society, pretty much the only
time that we pay attention to American history is when it is used as ammunition in contemporary
political debates. This instance is no exception says Liana Heitin. Randi Weingartens view is
simply the same. In comparison they both also mention College Board and how different
teachers are chosen to be apart of the decision makings on the new AP US History test. They
mention how the test was passed like it is every year yet, how many people and state officials
become dissatisfied and uncomfortable at the topics. Segregation, Slavery and Jim Crow are
some of the subjects that the test covers yet people tend to feel very touchy about it since most of
these events are usually glossed over during a normal history teaching. Both authors have made
it a point to speak about the different events and how they affect us. They communicate the same
meaning and deliver the same views. Yet I still prefer Heitins article over Weingartens. Its
strange how as a reader I feel as though she has created a bond with me and is not shouting or
barking her views and opinions on the subject. Instead she hums it almost like a mother hums to
her child. All while refuting and defending her beliefs. Unlike Weingarten who in his loudest
voice tells you what he thinks. His writing just drags on constantly. I don't mean to sound rude
about it but its just uninteresting to me. His type of writing caters to another crowd. But in the
end both writers do communicate the same meaning.
nothing hindering about this class and test it is simply a retelling of America. So let me ask
again. Are you afraid?
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