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Highlight the appropriate level for each criterion, then add brief but specific comments for each criterion (
"advanced").
Language
Content &
Form &
Appearance Persuasivenes
Organization
s
Criteria
Developing
Sections organization isn't
always clear or consistent;
Headings may not describe
content effectively
Proficient
Sections are usually
organized logically and
consistently; Headings
describe content
adequately
Bullet Point
clauses/phrases are hard
to understand and
structured inconsistently;
errors impede readability
throughout.
Bullet Point
clauses/phrases may be
hard to understand or
structured inconsistently;
errors impede readability
at times
bric
Comments
I like that you included a research experience section. I also like that your headings are bold and you used
Specific details address the
job's description directly
and aptly; evidence of
qualifications is plentiful
and convincing
You explained the details of your research experience well so that someone who doesn't necessarily under
White space, fonts, and
design are effective and
attractive
Under education I would move your degrees to the left and put CSUF on the right because haivng the scho
Bullet Point clauses/phrases
are effective and structured
consistently; nearly error
free
Under research I am not sure if "towards and continuous flow" and "research with Dr." are supposed to