Rema Kodaimati

Eaker
UWRT 1104
22 November 2016
Explain the gist of the assignment

For this unit we were supposed to compose

a digital essay on our topic of choice to
present our point or argument. With it being
a digital essay, we were expected to
present it in a way that is meant to be
through a screen and incorporate various
sources of media into it.

Explain where you are in the drafting process-brainstorming, outline, partial draft, virtually
complete?

At this point I am polishing my digital essay

and adding any last minute touches before
submission. It is virtually complete but I am
getting a second opinion on the final
product.

Describe a few things that you need help with

Organization? Outlining? Evidence?
Introduction or Conclusion? Development?
Figuring out your argument? Handling Other
Perspectives? Integrating Sources?

The only concern I really have at this point

is whether or not my digital essay is
multimodal enough and whether or not I
have integrated my sources properly. I also
am concerned about my conclusion and
whether or not it appropriately ends my
essay.

Unit 3: Studio Activity 2

The most helpful comments I received from the tutor were about my conclusion and what
more I could include in it. She told me to maybe propose a solution to the issue at hand and
provide a call to action of sorts. She also reminded me to discuss the sources of media that I
chose to include to better integrate them into the text. I wonder whether or not my essay is
multimodal enough and what more I could do in terms of making my layout more effective. I
think the content itself flows nicely and is well developed. I plan on working on the integration
of my sources and making sure that I correct all of the syntax and grammar errors.

UNC Charlotte Writing Resources Center Report

Client: Rema Kodaimati
Staff or Resource: Amy
Date: November 22, 2016, 1:00pm - 2:00pm
The session addressed the following:: Revision;
Assignment: Digital Essay
Description of the session: Looked over digital essay
Comments: Dear Rema,
It was great to talk to you today about your digital essay. We discussed:
- Integrating your sources more into the text, so the images don't look like they are just plopped there for
decoration
- Fixing the conclusion's first sentence, because right now it reads as if you are concluding that you believe
being more tolerant of one another would be detrimental to the human race
- Looking over your sentences. There were a few time you paused because you were unhappy with the
sentence structure. Reading out loud really helps catch instances of that, so go back and make sure to polish
up those sentences
Good luck as you revise,
Amy