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    The document provides feedback from others on a draft script. They note that the script needs to include headlines, make the tone more casual and fun, add background information, and have a good structure. Music and interviews were positives, but the script was seen as too formal. The feedback will be used to improve the draft.

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    The document provides feedback from others on a draft script. They note that the script needs to include headlines, make the tone more casual and fun, add background information, and have a good structure. Music and interviews were positives, but the script was seen as too formal. The feedback will be used to improve the draft.

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    36 views1 page

    Group Feedback On Script

    Uploaded by

    Tasnim
    The document provides feedback from others on a draft script. They note that the script needs to include headlines, make the tone more casual and fun, add background information, and have a good structure. Music and interviews were positives, but the script was seen as too formal. The feedback will be used to improve the draft.

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    What do you think about the script?

    What do you like about it?


    What do you think can be better?

    You need to mention the headlines


    I like that youve added background information
    Too formal, make it more fun

    I like the fact its factual


    You have various interviews with people, which is good
    You need to make it less formal

    What music are you using? Specify the type


    Have a good structure
    Make it more casual

    I emailed my group my draft script in order to gain some constructive criticism about it.
    This is what they had to say. Using the feedback I made some changes to my script.

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