EXPECTATIONS

Your class has attended a lecture on the benefits of training students to

think positively. Write an essay discussing the extent to which our
expectations may well result in different outcomes when pushing for
something.

A recent survey carried out by Laughter Organization has revealed

that our expectations may well result in different outcomes when pushing
for something. It is commonly known that thinking in a positive way is
beneficial for everybodys health. However, more often than not, we tend to
be quite pessimistic, WHICH IMPEDES and that impede us from achieving
our goals. This essay intends to examine whether or not our expectations
may well result in different outcomes when pushing for something (ES UNA
FRASE REPETIDA) THIS ESSAY IS DEVOTED TO FINDING OUT THE TRUTH OF
THAT WIDELY-SPREAD BELIEF.

Choosing ADOPTING a positive attitude creates great and harmonious

relationships since you will start ignorING peoples defaults and you will just
focus on their virtues. Then a positive atmosphere will be created.
Consequently, that positive atmosphere will help us to reach our
expectations calmly. In addition, it is widely known that stress may well be
a barrier when pushing for something. However, an optimistic view will
make stress disappear gradually since positive people overcome stress more
easily. Apart from that, positive attitude will increase our motivations and
our goals will be achieved quickly and easier.

On the other hand, having a positive attitude is not always beneficial.

Being always optimistic can lead people to a relaxing attitude that deprives
us of achieving our goals. Besides, being always positive can also lead us to
make mistakes. If we do not appreciate the complicated side of life, we will
constantly make mistakes since we will not make any effort to reach our
goals. GOOD!

(LIINKING WORD?) ALL IN ALL This essay has been intended to explain
the extent to which our expectations may well result in different outcomes
when pushing for something. According to results (NO HAY RESULTADOS,
HAY OPINIONES) THE ARGUMENTATION ABOVE, it is beneficial to be positive
when pushing for something. Nevertheless, we need to establish a limit, if
we live having our head in the clouds, we will never achieve our goals.

Gramtica 6 (no hay mucha variedad de estructuras)

Vocabulario 4

Estructura 5

Coherencia/ Cohesin 6

Complejidad general 6
TOTAL: 27

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