Year level: Key: Total: 1 - Needs work 3 - Good 2 Satisfactory 4 - Excellent!
Assessment Criteria 1 2 3 4 Comment:
Introduction is engaging and captures the readers interest, states the authors position (opinion) and introduces what they are going to discuss. (Does not begin with I believe or I think and uses an engaging technique such as a hypothetical situation, rhetorical question, fact/statistic or personal experience) Body includes 3 paragraphs and each paragraph includes a strong argument and at least 2 pieces of appropriate and convincing supporting information/explanation and evidence Conclusion effectively summarises the argument, restates the authors position and concludes with a call to action, best case scenario and/or worst case scenario (without simply restating the argument with the same words) Each paragraph has a topic sentence, 3 supporting sentences and a conclusive sentence
Rebuttal is included and is a common, strong counter
argument to the authors position. This is then effectively opposed by the writer with their own strong argument Argument is very strong, logical, reasonable and persuasive
Emotive language, inclusive language and 1 other
persuasive technique is included in the text
The text follows a logical and appropriate sequence
Word choice is strong and enhances the argument i.e.
includes technical language or topic specific language (e.g. obesity, cardiovascular health, rising trend, vital nutrients) and conjunctions (words that join sentences to illustrate your argument) e.g. because, although, therefore, however, evidently, furthermore Text contains few spelling, grammar and punctuation mistakes (Check your capital letters, full stops, sentence length, and SPELLING) Overall the text has a good tone, is well written and engaging to read.