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Sinead Armstrong LO3 Feedback. 01/03/17

Current Grade for LO3: Fail

The current grade is calculated on the work that is present on your blog. You
There are may have missing items, or vastly incomplete sections of work. Please
elements improve this. If you require help with any of this work, or need to show me
of Merit work before re-submitting to check the quality, please do so.
here,
However, Remember, the highest grade you can achieve on this learning
you have outcome is a Merit Grade, even if you have achieved this, if there are
not passed any minor corrections or additions, can you please ensure these are
this made.
learning
outcome Please ensure all of the work is uploaded on the blog.
due to Remember Dont overwrite the blog posts, make new blog posts that are
some clearly labelled with the words Re-Submission.
missing or incomplete work.
You have developed appropriate ideas for the advertisements and then also
developed proficient audio-visual pre production here. In your group you have
made an equal contribution to all of the documentation. There is a lack of
production schedule (plan) on your blog, which has reduced your grade, this is
required to pass this learning outcome, once you add it, the grade should
achieve a merit grade due to the rest of the pre production material.
The storyboard and shooting script convey the advert idea, and explains the
mise-en-scene required. The moodboard you have created also clearly shows the
accompanying advertisement idea and explains justifications for fonts and colour
schemes, outlining the connotations within.

The resubmission deadline is: 31/03/2017

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