STRENGTHS

1) Writer provides support for analysis.

EXAMPLE:- provide evidence to support it.
2) Arrangement of the paragraphs
-Highlight the key point we want to make in the paragraph.
-Beginning of each paragraph highlight the key point

3) Effectively connect supporting details to the main point.

4) Point-by-Point

- This organization is especially useful if the readers should have trouble

keeping track of point.

-To compare and contrast two institutions : high school & college

FOR EXAMPLE: The paragraph look like this

High school: *

College: *

5) Good and specific thesis statement

- Let the readers know about what is going to be contrasted in the following
paragraph (Categories)

6) Provide appropriate transition words or phrases to indicate comparison

and contrast

FOR EXAMPLE: -

WEAKNESSES

1) Text is imbalanced
-Whole text has no similarities between high school and college

-Text only explains the differences between high school and college

-To make the ideas of the text clear and balance, both similarities &
differences should be compared and contrasted.